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Wallflowers


Wallflowers with their faces raised, 
     and others too, with heads bowed low;
          the weak, the stronger, eyes all glazed... 
those flowers there all in a row.

Wallflowers placed against the wall, 
     stems bent and twisted, on display.
          In a long row, they line the hall, 
like wilted plants, no role to play.

Wallflowers there lined up as eight; 
     tomorrow perhaps there are less.
          So soon replaced by whims of fate...
more added flowers in distress.

They stab the heart of those who pass; 
     eyes look into our depth of soul.
          Blank eyes that glare like faded glass...
sad hearts that know there is no goal.
     
Wallflowers there against the wall;
     from wheelchairs come the quiet cries.
           I hear their silent, pleading call...
My anger I cannot disguise.


Sandra M. Haight

~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: Weepy Quatrain
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 05/21/2016
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I wrote about this moment, which is
intensely frozen in my mind, because of a visit to a local
nursing home. (photo from Goggle images.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 7:59 AM
I'm glad to see this one again. Congrats, it is still a personal favorite!
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Richard, for stopping by once again with your supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:52 PM
wow! Sandra, heartfelt poem congratulations on your win!
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for stopping by with your comment and congratulations. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:39 PM
wow, I can really tell that this moment frozen in time affected you greatly, because this is OUTSTANDING work, Sandra. Wish I had thought of doing mine like this, thinking of things I have seen that made me so angry . BIG congrats in the contest.fave
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea, for your very supportive comments, congrats, and the wonderful fave! Yes...very sad for some at these nursing homes. Hugs, Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Thank you very much, BL. Sandra
Scars Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Sandra, wow.....very touching and heartbreaking. what I was looking for..thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Luloo, for another fine contest for my placement! Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT
Wigley Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 10:36 PM
On having to repeatedly visit my good Lady's mother in such a place over a period of time, I can relate to this piece, Sandra, and you've captured it so well. Death's waiting room........ Well done. Viv x
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:59 PM
For me this is a personal favourite. Congratulations.
Merryman Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 1:48 PM
A heartbreaking write, Sandra. You have captured the plight of these lovely older people in your poem. So sad. Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Kim. Visiting nursing homes really upsets me...I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Babbit Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 11:10 AM
I have that same image in my head, It burns my heart and fires my rage at how easily we discard lives, so I brought my loved one home. A well expressed sad tribute or perhaps a condemnation to what we have become. Well portrayed. DMB
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Thank you for your visit and supportive comments, DMB. What a selfless act for you to bring home your loved one! I appreciate your stopping by. Sandra
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