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WALLFLOWER

as the dance ends ~ the wallflower comes to life

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David Crandall

Date: 6/1/2025 6:35:00 PM

Cool! Hurray for the wallflower!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/3/2025 11:14:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, Cool. This one line was so much fun to write. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2025 9:19:00 PM

Perfect. ~ Ex-wallflower... I really was

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2025 10:14:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, Perfect. This one line was a ton of fun to write. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/31/2025 12:25:00 PM

Paula, is this the contest with alliteration only? If not, it is a wonderful monoku~ "the wallflower comes to life" is intriguing!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/2/2025 8:39:00 AM

Okidoki

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2025 10:12:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you enjoyed my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write. Yes, this is for the contest. Only one line but was fun to write. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/31/2025 1:46:00 AM

There are many types of wallflowers. Some dare, some don't.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:39:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you enjoyed my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write. Yes, many types of wallflowers. It was fun to write. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/30/2025 6:42:00 PM

Good one Paula. That is usually when they do.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:37:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be a, Good one. It is sad to go to a dance and not dance. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2025 4:13:00 PM

aww that is so cute Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:35:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, so cute. It was a fun one to write. Hugs... Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2025 1:22:00 PM

- " the wallflower comes to life" ... I thought about the one who never dared to dance... just watched others dance... we called them "wall decorations" :) - A great one for the contest, Paula :) - Best wishes :) - I did wildflowers :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:33:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment and for your Best wishes. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, A great one for the contest. It is sad to go to a dance and not dance. In school we called them wallflowers. Hugs... Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/30/2025 1:09:00 PM

Very well composed, Paula, enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck with the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:29:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment and for your Good luck with the contest. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, Very well composed. Also glad you enjoyed reading it. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2025 12:18:00 PM

Very nice!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 9:20:00 AM

Great seeing you. Thank You for your comment. Glad you found my "WALLFLOWER" Monoku write to be, Very nice. It was fun to write. Have a great and blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2025 10:44:00 AM

WALLFLOWER ~ Date Written: 5/30/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~ MONOKLITTERATION Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud