Wallflower

Watching people like it’s sport Amber smile the winning sort Lovely lips repeat a joke Laughs on cue as you hope Fuchsia fears hidden well Looking for exit despite sitting there Onyx knight full of silver stars Wishing to leave soon by car Evening close to an end Romantic night just begins

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/16/2024 5:37:00 AM

a beautiful Acrostic! It flows quite well. I especially liked 'fuchsia fears hidden well" Fabulous imagery within your words. Excellent...enjoy your day, hugs, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 3/16/2024 7:43:00 AM

So happy you liked it Sara have a fabulous weekend!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/16/2024 1:12:00 AM

What a gorgeous acrostic. So well written and flows too seamlessly, i love so many lines in this especially “ Watching people like it’s sport Amber smile the winning sort“ maybe i am too a wall flower as sometimes i do that. “ Fuchsia fears hidden well“ deep . “ Onyx knight full of silver stars“ creative line too. You have a way with words dear karen. Pleasure reading this.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/16/2024 1:24:00 AM

Thanks dear Inky! I too am a wallflower at parties.