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Wall Painting

There hangs the painting on a once vacant wall
Unmoved and unnoticed by any single man
Painted by someone who died in a short span              
Who was willing to give purely for the fall
When he thought that he had accomplished it all
And had done everything precisely to plan
It was too late to undo what he began
His service was needed in a duty call
 
Now hangs the painting in the busy parlor
Seen by all who admire beautiful scenery
The deceased nameless painter is now well known
Since the gallant soldier was man of valor
Displayed in military khaki greenery
Was the painter whose painting would now be shown

Copyright © 2008 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Second Place Winner ~ "A Poem From Your First Year” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
July 7, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/29/2011 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:11:00 PM
who was the painter? Caryl I'd love to know! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 6/28/2011 2:51:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your dynamic win in Brian's contest.. wonderful words and win my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I wish I could see on my computer what you are seeing. Not sure where I placed or who placed where. But thank you for the congrats, maybe I will see tomorrow.
Date: 11/11/2010 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Caryl. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your swell poetry heady for the second round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:15:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck in the next phase luv..
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:53:00 AM
Many congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 3:43:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 12/27/2009 9:22:00 AM
Nice twist in this piece Caryl >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 1:13:00 PM
How ironic that the artist painted himself in military garb, Caryl. It's a great tribute to those who make the ultimate sacrifice for their countries. Very well penned! Love, Carolyn
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