Walking Through Time:

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I hear The footprints near And feel their beating heart Not knowing their distant remarks Now past 26~May~2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/3/2017 9:55:00 AM

A lovely suspenseful Cinquain which leaves our mind free to interpretation, Rick. I can also see this as a metaphor...man and beast. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/31/2017 2:08:00 PM

Hi Rick This is a good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your high placement: -) Alexis

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/31/2017 11:26:00 AM

Great write, White Wolf! Congrats on your high placement win!! :)

Dean Wood

Date: 5/31/2017 8:14:00 AM

Wow, very nice Wolf. I really like this one! Congrats. - Dean

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 8:17:00 AM

Thanks, Dean! It was my first attempt at this form so I'm stoked! /|\

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/31/2017 6:41:00 AM

Wow, congratulations, only one suggestion, "now past" would add the element of flow, IMHO. Fine piece though and a beautiful pic to accompany. Congrats on your placement too.

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 6:53:00 AM

Interesting! I might take you up on that suggestion! Thanks /|\

James Inman

Date: 5/31/2017 1:40:00 AM

Congrats WW

John Anderson

Date: 5/31/2017 1:11:00 AM

Congratulations with your Third Place in the Cinquain contest. A delightful poem that exemplifies what the form is about, especially the first and last lines. Very nice. Cheers,