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"To get back to shore, swin against the strong currents of life"--quote by poet

Cursed with misadventure and persisting hardship, he still walks the razor's edge And he walks through shards of glass with both feet bleeding. He's stubbed his toe on one too many rocks making his way through the bumpy pathway of life; despite his struggles, he remains resolute in spirit. He encounters mountains; many stand towering over him, but he never turns back or gets around them. He keeps on climbing to the summit. Life hasn't been kind. It has thrown him curveballs, it has beaten him down and tested his resolve, yet he smiles through it all. Life's Struggles- Any Form - Updated- Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 03/04/2021

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Date: 3/17/2021 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. love phyl
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/17/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phyllis:-)
Date: 3/10/2021 8:44:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Free Verse poem that speaks of great courage to keep going no matter what and I love the quotes, well done _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, comments and congrats, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 3/10/2021 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Churchill was right, keep going. Love your ending, "yet he smiles through it all." How one goes through it, is what makes the difference. I have been through hell more than once and not a nice place to be. Have a blessed day as you write away..................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 8:50:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Paula:-) Stay blessed, my friend!
Date: 3/10/2021 3:09:00 AM
Great entry with GREAT imagery. Congrats on your TOP win Edward. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anitha:-) Have a blessed day!
Date: 3/10/2021 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful write :) Congratulations on your win Edward Ibeh
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 3:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paris-Marie:-)
Date: 3/10/2021 12:44:00 AM
- Life isn’t always going to be comprised of sunshine and rainbows - Congratulations on your win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 3:42:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Well-said and I agree!
Date: 3/9/2021 10:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! So inspiring and spirit-propelling toward triumph from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by and commenting, Beata:-)
Date: 3/9/2021 6:52:00 PM
This is a blessing to me... I love the way you've written it, the imagery, the insight, the imagination... inspiration at it's finest. I love this write. God bless you always and congrats on your win. Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/9/2021 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Regina:-) Glad this one resonated with you!
Date: 3/9/2021 6:36:00 PM
“yet he smiles through it all” ~ the secret! Congrats on your to win and thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us all!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/9/2021 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Date: 3/9/2021 4:40:00 PM
An inspiring free verse Edward, congratulations on the well deserved win... Belle
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Date: 3/9/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle:-) I appreciate the comments and congrats!
Date: 3/4/2021 1:34:00 PM
I have a deep feeling of empathy for the subject of this poem. It is very well written. Poignant and compelling.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/4/2021 1:36:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, L.Milton:-) God bless.

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