Walking On Water With Him

I wish to walk down ancient street
If I do I'll get wet
Unless
Him on watery street I meet
and to him who paid Debt
Confess


For Nette's Memento of Water Contest.

Visual two

March 11, 2015

By: Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Macdonald Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:14 AM
Nice :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 10:31 PM
what a cool way you chose to do the contest, writing of Jesus' walking on water. Congrats. It's a great poem
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks Andrea. I still havn't had a chance to read all the entries.
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Very beautiful spiritual write, Richard, congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings dear friend
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:43 AM
You are kind Eve.
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:52 PM
I really like this one!! Subtle way to show your faith..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Sara.;0)
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 10:49 AM
I'm back to congratulate you on your win, my friend. Hugs! Kim:)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Hugs back to you Kim.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Back with congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Rhonda.
Ebbs Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Congrats Richard :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Ed, love the hat!
Haight Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Richard. Great interpretation of the visual. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Thanks I wanted to go a different way with it.
Hamilton Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 5:47 PM
congrats on win Rick with this fine poem hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:50 PM
Thanks and hugs to you too Shadow.
Onclaud Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:45 PM
divinely crafted, rich.. thanks for making my contest an interesting one... huge congrats and huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Thanks and a big hug back to you.
Stoner Jr Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:40 PM
congratulations Richard on this fine win
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Thanks Robert.
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 3:51 PM
I do like your take on the theme Richard - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:49 PM
Thanks and hugs back Jan.
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:38 AM
I am always inspired by your words, Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:49 AM
;0)
Hunjeri Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Amen and I'll join you in that walk. Wish you the best in the contest richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Good morning and thanks Njeri.
Yvonne Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Love this take on Nette's contest. A great write by a great poet!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Thanks again Armand.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:22 AM
Wonderful, Richard! I love your unique, inspirational verse...I'm inspired! Hugs, Rhonda
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Rhonda.
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Yes, maybe you won't get wet if he lets you walk on the water with him. As if walking on the lake!! An interesting perspective here.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:20 AM
In Canada we walk on lakes all the time! Thanks for commenting Andrea.
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March 12, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Excellent dear, Richard! You can do it!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Nunez Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Inspiring, Richard! A unique interpretation of the visual. 7. Kim:)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Kim, I'm pleased by your comment.
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