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Walking On the Moon

I’m walking on the moon again - Far away from any cares below. I’ve made a home of this baron place - And cherish my every moment here alone. I hear no cry’s or demand’s of others - Only peaceful silence ring’s in my ears The days are spent in joyful reflection - My thoughts are happy and my vision cleared

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Deb M

Date: 3/6/2023 3:37:00 PM

Oh l get that Darrell totally ! Love the way you have written this great poem….Debx

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/6/2023 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my work and taking time to comment. Honestly I believe the writing in this piece is a little weak but the picture of walking alone on the moon is appealing to many of us. Thanks again. Darrell

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/6/2023 1:27:00 AM

precious poem, i think too "silence clears the vision", thougtful poem, i adore

Darrell Rose
Date: 3/6/2023 4:35:00 AM

Thank you for the kind remark and observation. Sometimes we as writers are inspired by a single thought which in this case was the opening line. How pleasant it is sometimes to “Walk alone on the moon “ that we might see more clearly