Walking On the Moon

I’m walking on the moon again - 
Far away from any cares below. 

I’ve made a home of this baron place - 
And cherish my every moment here alone.

I hear no cry’s or demand’s of others - 
Only peaceful  silence ring’s in my ears 

The days are spent in joyful reflection -
My thoughts are happy and my vision cleared
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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M  Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Oh l get that Darrell totally ! Love the way you have written this great poem….Debx
Rose Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 10:16 PM
Thank you so much for reading my work and taking time to comment. Honestly I believe the writing in this piece is a little weak but the picture of walking alone on the moon is appealing to many of us. Thanks again. Darrell
Rolland Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:27 AM
precious poem, i think too "silence clears the vision", thougtful poem, i adore
Rose Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Thank you for the kind remark and observation. Sometimes we as writers are inspired by a single thought which in this case was the opening line. How pleasant it is sometimes to “Walk alone on the moon “ that we might see more clearly
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