Walking On the Beach

On the beach board
I watch life ... and my
life goes by ... I seek ...
what I don't know ...!

Comes the tired athlete,
training for life ...
running lucky that
insists not to arrive ... like this
like me...

Right behind a brunette
wiggle face ... scales
the chairs ... bag
aside to swing
how she ... warms me
the eyes I peer with
desire ...

Ah! look what a charm ...
the dreamer sculptor carved
a couple making love
without making real love ...
Ah! a splendid mermaid
carved in the sand ...
how impressive to enchant us ...
oh! but here comes the sea ...
luck, the wave has not come ...

I keep peeking
attentive, interested ...
A bike alone
conducts itself ... possible ..?
what an invention this is!
Two sneakers shoes
in syndrome
jumping off
obstacles without
lose pace ...
surprising disease ...!
6 synchronized legs,
perform slight waltz ...
A juggler footballer
uses the ball as juggling
and plays with my
head...

Looking down
I notice two legs,
shapely,
two well dressed feet
an elegant floor ...
will be...? will be who I hope ...!?
Ah! but I discern now
2 strong legs walking,
2 feet decided walking ..
suddenly come together, kiss ...
Oh! It's a pity that
I'm not the one who makes the scene ...

I close my face ... abandonment
the post ... I am gone ...
I'm leaving ... I'll swilling
down... again I will
be drunk...
loneliness devours me ...!
 

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Date: 8/6/2019 8:24:00 AM
This is cool. It deserves more reads and comments. You have your own style.
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Date: 8/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Richards... very glad being receiving your solid comment... Really i have my own style, i like write sometimes in joke style, dramatic, social, lyric poetry and so ... Salute alkas
Date: 8/5/2019 12:53:00 PM
I know I always start my comments to your poems with a wow, but WOW Alkas you never cease to amaze me, and so prolifically. My two favorite lines of the dream beach scene are: "the wave has not come", and "I close my face". Both powerful images pertaining to the meaning of the stanza they belong to. Sad, Alkas, but so beautiful. Thank you.
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Date: 8/9/2019 7:14:00 AM
I thank you Jeff for your smart and kind comments... I try do create images indifferent ways... i think that poetry is this... salute alkas.
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