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Walking On the Beach

On the beach board I watch life ... and my life goes by ... I seek ... what I don't know ...! Comes the tired athlete, training for life ... running lucky that insists not to arrive ... like this like me... Right behind a brunette wiggle face ... scales the chairs ... bag aside to swing how she ... warms me the eyes I peer with desire ... Ah! look what a charm ... the dreamer sculptor carved a couple making love without making real love ... Ah! a splendid mermaid carved in the sand ... how impressive to enchant us ... oh! but here comes the sea ... luck, the wave has not come ... I keep peeking attentive, interested ... A bike alone conducts itself ... possible ..? what an invention this is! Two sneakers shoes in syndrome jumping off obstacles without lose pace ... surprising disease ...! 6 synchronized legs, perform slight waltz ... A juggler footballer uses the ball as juggling and plays with my head... Looking down I notice two legs, shapely, two well dressed feet an elegant floor ... will be...? will be who I hope ...!? Ah! but I discern now 2 strong legs walking, 2 feet decided walking .. suddenly come together, kiss ... Oh! It's a pity that I'm not the one who makes the scene ... I close my face ... abandonment the post ... I am gone ... I'm leaving ... I'll swilling down... again I will be drunk... loneliness devours me ...! Word Analytics

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Date: 8/6/2019 8:24:00 AM
This is cool. It deserves more reads and comments. You have your own style.
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Date: 8/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Richards... very glad being receiving your solid comment... Really i have my own style, i like write sometimes in joke style, dramatic, social, lyric poetry and so ... Salute alkas
Date: 8/5/2019 12:53:00 PM
I know I always start my comments to your poems with a wow, but WOW Alkas you never cease to amaze me, and so prolifically. My two favorite lines of the dream beach scene are: "the wave has not come", and "I close my face". Both powerful images pertaining to the meaning of the stanza they belong to. Sad, Alkas, but so beautiful. Thank you.
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Date: 8/9/2019 7:14:00 AM
I thank you Jeff for your smart and kind comments... I try do create images indifferent ways... i think that poetry is this... salute alkas.

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