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Walking On Ripple Path

ablaze horizon
lite path on rippling water~
sand dwellers burrow

10/25/2022
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Romios Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Fantastic Haiku Eve! One of the best ever see and faved. Pangie
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Very descriptive. I wonder who those sand dwellers are. Maybe the humankind or a colony of ants. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Baker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:46 PM
A Haiku full of imagery, Eve. I enjoyed your poem and the pictures that match the words. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:07 PM
- I wish I was there, Eve :) - hugs
Leffanta Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Imagine how Ilene would enjoy walking on the pictured beach! Aloha!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:14 AM
Great and to the point. Hugs.
Bothwell Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:34 PM
thank you...i dont really get through long poem's short sweet did i say this
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:42 PM
Thank you , Coy, sometimes short are sweeter.
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