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Walking Blindly

I'm walking blindly In a two way street Feeling my way Stumbling on my feet Most of the time I don't know my path What the hell I'm doing How to get it straight I'm crawling still Trying to learn Committing mistakes Feeling the burn Of being out of place But I’m doing my best I just need a direction A north… A compass… *** January 02, 2017

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Darren White

Date: 1/3/2017 9:45:00 AM

Hi sweetie, I'll crawl with you, I give you my compass, because I totally lack any sense of direction :)

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/3/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks love! Let's get lost together... my sense of direction may be worst than yours, lol (But... Shhhh... don't tell anyone... I have GPS :P) hehehe ;)

Chris Green

Date: 1/3/2017 9:44:00 AM

One foot after the other, just keep walking, the direction you need will find you when you least expect it. Nicely expressed Claudia.

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/3/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Chris!!! Yes, the important port is never to stagnate... Hugs :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/3/2017 1:15:00 AM

Lovely, Claudia. We are all on that same journey and we all need direction. Thanks for posting this reminder that we all have common issues we face in life. I read your blog. :) I'm happy for you. I was gifted a PM and Life membership by a very dear member here. I have a feeling your benefactor is mine too. I've been to Brazil...beautiful place. Hugs

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/3/2017 3:56:00 AM

Thank you Eileen! I'm still speechless by this unexpected gift... and I'm glad you've come to Brazil, we do have some gorgeous places! Hugs :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/2/2017 8:06:00 PM

How does the song go? "Use faith as a rudder, conscience for a compass and a blanket for a sail" Love the write,Claudia:)

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/3/2017 3:51:00 AM

Thank you Daniel! And i loved the song you gave as example ;)