Claudia Polydoro Poet Free verse

Walking Blindly

I'm walking blindly
In a two way street 
Feeling my way
Stumbling on my feet

Most of the time
I don't know my path
What the hell I'm doing 
How to get it straight 

I'm crawling still 
Trying to learn 
Committing mistakes 
Feeling the burn 

Of being out of place 
But I’m doing my best
I just need a direction
A north… 
A compass…

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January 02, 2017

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Darren White January 3, 2017 at 9:45 AM Hi sweetie, I'll crawl with you, I give you my compass, because I totally lack any sense of direction :) Claudia Polydoro January 3, 2017 at 10:01 AM Thanks love! Let's get lost together... my sense of direction may be worst than yours, lol (But... Shhhh... don't tell anyone... I have GPS :P) hehehe ;)

Chris Green January 3, 2017 at 9:44 AM One foot after the other, just keep walking, the direction you need will find you when you least expect it. Nicely expressed Claudia. Claudia Polydoro January 3, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you Chris!!! Yes, the important port is never to stagnate... Hugs :)

Eileen Manassian January 3, 2017 at 1:15 AM Lovely, Claudia. We are all on that same journey and we all need direction. Thanks for posting this reminder that we all have common issues we face in life. I read your blog. :) I'm happy for you. I was gifted a PM and Life membership by a very dear member here. I have a feeling your benefactor is mine too. I've been to Brazil...beautiful place. Hugs Claudia Polydoro January 3, 2017 at 3:56 AM Thank you Eileen! I'm still speechless by this unexpected gift... and I'm glad you've come to Brazil, we do have some gorgeous places! Hugs :)

Daniel Turner January 2, 2017 at 8:06 PM How does the song go? "Use faith as a rudder, conscience for a compass and a blanket for a sail" Love the write,Claudia:) Claudia Polydoro January 3, 2017 at 3:51 AM Thank you Daniel! And i loved the song you gave as example ;)