Hemi Lewis Poet Light Verse

Walking Backwards In To Life

In my world of life i walk backwards in to my future to look for light

All I see in my flight is a path full of strife

For the path has not changed` as I have created the same 

And the flame will stay the same 

As I do not know how to change the game

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dinda Minardi July 8, 2011 at 7:15 AM You have a good thoughts! :)

Rhia Madison Thomer June 20, 2011 at 11:25 PM an intriguing piece, i have enjoyed it. thanks for the comments and welcome to the soup :) --Mads

June 18, 2011 at 5:31 PM A very interesting look at life. Welcome to PS. Cheers, Norma :)

Joyce Johnson June 18, 2011 at 7:10 AM And as you have learned you are not going to change the game by looking backwards. Thank you for your comment Henri and welcome to our corner. Love, Joyce