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Walking Backwards In To Life

In my world of life i walk backwards in to my future to look for light All I see in my flight is a path full of strife For the path has not changed` as I have created the same And the flame will stay the same As I do not know how to change the game

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/8/2011 7:15:00 AM
You have a good thoughts! :)
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:25:00 PM
an intriguing piece, i have enjoyed it. thanks for the comments and welcome to the soup :) --Mads
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:31:00 PM
A very interesting look at life. Welcome to PS. Cheers, Norma :)
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Date: 6/18/2011 7:10:00 AM
And as you have learned you are not going to change the game by looking backwards. Thank you for your comment Henri and welcome to our corner. Love, Joyce
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