Walking Around In a Daze

Most days my moods are high as a kite But today is not one of those days The love of my life is under the weather So I'm walking around in a daze No rhyme or no reason to continue on Will call it quits for today No incentive no drive to keep me going For her love I'm pining away Hope tomorrow she feels much better To help me get back on track The love of my life, my heart and soul Can't wait to get her back When she feels down I feel down too Our lives are bound at the heart I've told her nearly ten thousand times I've loved her from the very start © Jack Ellison 2014< center>
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Date: 3/31/2014 9:37:00 PM
She'll be up in no time, Jack! Just like you - the energizer :) Sweet write.
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Date: 4/1/2014 7:19:00 AM
Your prediction came true... Cathie is feeling much much better! Thank you my dear friend! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 3/31/2014 6:27:00 PM
We all hope that it's nothing serious. Get well soon Cathie. I know Dragon and I are usually crazy and irrelevant... but not with Cathie sick... Dragon is blue and hugging his penguins until Cathie is well... Come here Dragon... I need a hug, too.... Remember to keep smiling for her Jack... I'm sure she'll need a few smiles till she feels better... which I'm sure she will feel better... soon.
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:15:00 PM
She'll be fine... actually feeling better already so tell Dragon! Cathie says hi! Love, us guys... XOXOX
Date: 3/31/2014 3:31:00 PM
Oh, Kenny....hope things are better soon. Hate to know you aren't happy. Cheer up....this too shall pass. She will be well again and you can smile...Hugs
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:13:00 PM
Cathie will be fine... she's already feeling better! Don't know what I'd do without this beautiful lady! Loving hugs, Kenny XOXOX
Date: 3/31/2014 7:18:00 AM
I'm sorry that your wife is under the weather my friend! I know what you mean when a loved one is sick, you feel down too! I hope you get feeling better too Jack! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/31/2014 8:51:00 AM
She is so rarely under the weather! She does so much for me and it makes me realize and appreciate how much I rely on her!
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