Get Your Premium Membership

Walking Alone

i'm in the badest of the bad the lowest of the low now i'm gonna get up and give a good show. Everyone stands up talks and they never walk, i'm here today to talk the talk,just wait and see if I walk the walk.You see I did wrong I showed i'm not strong. You got me now but next ill show you they're wrong.Don't try to doubt ill make you see my life mill make a complete one-eighty. This creatures been inside hating on me making me bleak. I did not see they gave me there best I only showed my family the rest. Now i don't got a home and i'm walking alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/5/2016 2:30:00 AM
patrick, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2011 4:47:00 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Patrick. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/20/2011 3:34:00 AM
Nice narrative prose with the interplay of the rhymings words, Patrick
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2011 7:17:00 PM
You've got some good rhyming within this vernacular. Welcome to the site. I hope you like it here.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry