Walking Alone

i'm in the badest of the bad the lowest of the low now i'm gonna get up and give a 
good show. Everyone stands up talks and they never walk, i'm here today to talk 
the talk,just wait and see if I walk the walk.You see I did wrong I showed i'm not 
strong. You got me now but next ill show you they're wrong.Don't try to doubt ill 
make you see my life mill make a complete one-eighty. This creatures been inside 
hating on me making me bleak. I did not see they gave me there best I only showed 
my family the rest. Now i don't got a home and i'm walking alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 5, 2016 at 2:30 AM
patrick, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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January 21, 2011 at 4:47 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Patrick. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2011 at 3:34 AM
Nice narrative prose with the interplay of the rhymings words, Patrick
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January 19, 2011 at 7:17 PM
You've got some good rhyming within this vernacular. Welcome to the site. I hope you like it here.
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