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i don't believe you i want to but i can't you're smoke and mirrors you're on you're off you're on again you're here you're gone you're all attention when i explode your minimum is not enough you don't impress me you fail at every chance your minimum will never be enough put on the spot you make the effort but empty promises is what i get convincing at the time as they may be you fail to inspire confidence why i haven't given up on you remains somewhat of a mystery your minimum keeps you afloat for now you're hovering on thin borderlines and you seem quite content at that you make promises that i keep taking in good faith you don't follow through you keep falling short is that really all you've got? but when i turn the tables i have to wonder why it is that i'm ok with that? I need to know if you're ready to meet me halfway ~ posted on March 20, 2025

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