Walking

As I walk under a sky
Of thousands shades of blue
With the sun kiss warmth
Touching my skin
All I can think about
Is only you
Possessor of my soul,
Why are you so beautiful?
You’ve shaken my being
Just by knowing 
I am also a small part
Of your beauty

If the birds can speak
It will tell me the secret of its flight
If the sun can talk
It will send me the song of its light
If the moon can sigh
It will let me know its longing
Is the same as mine
Every moment the universe breathes
I become entangled with its beats
Till there’s no more separating ways 
Between being and existing
Just loving… you

I keep walking inside your immensity
As human being
As lover
As a woman
As a daughter
I can go on giving my low self names and titles
But can’t you see how insignificance this me is?
Sky, sun, moon, flowers
We’re all making our existence
Yet the only one here is
Just you, The Beloved!



"Today is my birthday and I just make one of the most difficult choice in life so far, leaving poetrysoup. There are so many poets here that I have come to care and even love, yet goodbye is inevitable. Thank you to those who has allowed me to walk inside your immensity... there are no words to define your beauty. May your journey is filled with leaves of speech, flowers of love and memories of songs... I salut you, dear poet."
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Agustin Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:42 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Peranteau Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 10:30 PM
did ya hear mine he...tickling yourn sensitive...shhh, listen...shhhhh, just listen
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Still miss you, Linda
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Hi Mian, wonder if you are ever coming back. Love SKAT
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Hi MIA
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March 21, 2013 at 8:11 AM
I'm wondering if your ever coming back... miss your v hello's and poems... always~ Linda
A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Mia , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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December 17, 2012 at 4:37 PM
hoping you will come back soon..pd
Falotico Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Beautiful piece Mia... vey enjoyed... Michael
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November 21, 2012 at 8:07 PM
Hi Mia,Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
J.T. Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Wow. Well written poem I must say - JH
Maverick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Iv'e really enjoyed this one MIA,, thank you for your great comments on mine and why are you going?? I among many shall miss you yours Joe..)
Loving Iii Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:56 PM
you are going to miss me.
D. Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 12:07 PM
better to be M.I.A. then dead maybe you will be found and if its not too presuptionuous a word of advice.....its always the weak that react to the strong so always be mindful of your reactons
A   Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Hi, Mia...Tomorrow is my Dad's birthday... and my first granddaughter... they both celebrate on May 11th... happy birthday... to you... I'm was hoping your new road would be here on the soup. I wish i could encourage you to stay. I meant every word i said through your soup-mail. After reading your very heartfelt mail.. I've been wanting to reach out to you. But, my internet and connection are at it's worse. Hopeful you stop by and visit, and maybe you can give me your e-mail If you like I would like to keep in touch with you, I'm really sad. Maybe I should have not woken you up that other day. your poems where all peacefully asleep.. (in a good way) and there i go wondering where you where at. Mia, a super happy birthday to you. Gosh, i'm sad~ your song will remain here with me..always yours truly The Poet Destroyer... xox... from Texas...
A   Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:59 PM
MIA, no...no! DId you remove all your poems...please let me know...I've been having so much trouble with my internet connections... please let me know... :-(
Williams Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 10:26 AM
M.I.A. happy birthday, soory you are leaving, hopefully to exciting new ventures..David
Minardi Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Happy birthday, dear Mia. Why? huwahuhuhuhuuu, am gonna miss your words. I hope for the best only to you! I love how you compare ur feelings with the sun, birds and moon. Bye :)
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 1:45 AM
Happy birthday M.I.A. - so sorry for you leaving P-S - I salut you for all your lovely poems.- Wish you all the best !!!! - Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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