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Walkin' Back From Tucson

Walkin' back from Tucson Just a lonely little blue son, Castrol oil across my face. Needin’ feminine touch So bad I can taste. Though the good Lord Knows the final law. And to Him I’m just coleslaw.

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David Crandall

Date: 7/21/2024 9:06:00 PM

Cool poem, I'll have to listen to the Willie Nelson song. Cole slaw is underrated!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2024 10:08:00 AM

I really like this one and that witty last line

Matt Caliri
Date: 6/28/2024 11:18:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! I don't have the faintest idea why I wrote this. I think I just liked the idea of rhyming with "Tucson." It's very loosely based on "Driving Back From the City of New Orleans" by Willie Nelson.