Matt Caliri Poet Rhyme

Walkin' Back From Tucson

Walkin' back from Tucson
Just a lonely little blue son,
Castrol oil across my face.
Needin’ feminine touch
So bad I can taste.
Though the good Lord
Knows the final law.
And to Him I’m just coleslaw.

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David Crandall July 21, 2024 at 9:06 PM Cool poem, I'll have to listen to the Willie Nelson song. Cole slaw is underrated!

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2024 at 10:08 AM I really like this one and that witty last line Matt Caliri June 28, 2024 at 11:18 PM Thanks, Andrea! I don't have the faintest idea why I wrote this. I think I just liked the idea of rhyming with "Tucson." It's very loosely based on "Driving Back From the City of New Orleans" by Willie Nelson.