Walked Thousand Miles

I walked and walked tirelessly for thousands of miles
                 crossing vast dales and steep soaring mountains far,
                  in search of you, my beloved, found you at last..
                           How did I not know where my true love were!

                    O my angel, we met at untainted dawn of life 
                when we hardly recognized how passionate we felt
              my world broke down as sandcastles on a sea-shore, I..
             crushed, forlorn, like a broken-winged bird, the day you left

                        I will never forget the desperate feeling
                       of a dreary painful loss being without you,
                you tip-toed softly in my dreams, your angelic face
                      shining like a shimmering star in azure blue.

                    endless journey of love…in summer, in winter, 
                        eternal quest continued in incessant rain
              stormy rough nights, the blustery wind whooshed and howled, 
                    blinded my musing eyes, I was in ceaseless pain. 

                      All my life I walked and walked tirelessly for you,
              thousand miles of vast dales and steep mountains far
                        You finally with me, my life at harmony
                           How did I not know where my true love were!


                                          July 17, 2022
                      
               Syllables (12 and 13, Refrain - 10) checked by HMS.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/26/2022 10:06:00 AM
A beautiful write. Love your line, "You finally with me, my life at harmony." Glad you found him. Have a blessed day ................
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Date: 7/24/2022 7:37:00 PM
Mala your words express true love. With reading I realize you were fortunate enough to find it. Many don't. It is a pleasure to read your heartfelt words that you express sincerely. God bless you my Dear...
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry with us, Mala. Have a great weekend my friend, Bill
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:06:00 PM
this is so beautifully emotive, Mala. Wonderful writing, and thanks for seeing my poetry today.
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