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In a world of social media our lives are being guided and controlled by market forces, in a way the human mind has become a prisoner. Our attention the greatest commodity. We feel mildly connected or are we really unable to form long-lasting & meaningful relationships anymore? ---
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Walk With Me

Walk with Me 

I made my way
Through the darkened streets
Past the hungry hearts
Where the enemy eats 

I browsed through glass
At my dear old friends
Where their silent smiles
Replace love that mends 

And I somehow feel
Like I'm missing out
Like there's something wrong
Like I want to shout 

Your lips don't move
But I see your thoughts
Like you are crying out
For a hug, of sorts 

We need hands to hold
We need hugs to give
Take the red pill now
While there's time to live.. 

And I wonder how
It has come to this
We have each replaced
True connection bliss 

With a pocket world
That controls us all..
Making us feel large
While we shrink to small 

So my prayer is this;
Stop us going under.
Wake our hearts, dear Lord,
From this walking slumber.


Jinjagoliath 
11th March 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Mcconnell Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Such a great piece Christopher with such good imagery and insightfulness. I'm pleased to see you're a believer in Christ just like me, amen indeed! Blessings always, Gordon
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