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Walk Through the Meadow

I walked through the meadow this afternoon To enjoy this spring’s bloodroot growing wild Short-lived blooms soon disappearing among The taller stalks of milkweed and columbine. I masked today because the pollen count is high [My spring bout with allergies is almost over] So, I dare not tempt Mother Nature’s malady. I see the red-winged blackbirds have returned, Nesting in the old fencerow along the roadside Where domestic daisies and asters proliferate, And I suspect a nest of bunnies could be found. Until worn down, the path is almost overgrown Brownish dead stalks from the early spring snow And I waded through a patch of beggar’s lice Which I carried until I returned to my backyard Then picking them off one by one, I fretted, But my first trip of the year was so rewarding And I could hardly wait to tell you what I saw.
Written May 9, 2022 for "Brian Strand's Premier Poetry Contest" FRONT PAGE PICK All Poetry - June 6, 2022

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Date: 5/13/2022 2:35:00 PM
Your imagery is gorgeously penned here "I see the red-winged blackbirds have returned, Nesting in the old fencerow along the roadside Where domestic daisies and asters proliferate,"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/13/2022 5:27:00 PM
Well, that's what I hope to accomplish...the actual feel of a stroll in the afternoon through the meadow.
Date: 5/11/2022 5:06:00 PM
You maximized that walk, Milk, and got an enjoyable poem from it to boot. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/12/2022 3:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Bill. The meadow is a place I invented for the sole purpose of writing about my adventures there.
Date: 5/9/2022 10:36:00 PM
I love riding along with you in your pocket Milt ! The sights , sounds and smells were delicious . I hope you picked a few flowers to bring back . A lovely stroll . Thank you ! Susan :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/10/2022 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan. I generally only pick one, which I put into a bud vase and set on my kitchen window.
Date: 5/9/2022 12:16:00 PM
Nothing beats a stroll through the countryside seeing the landscape that has been reborn. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 12:20:00 PM
Ah, 'tis so true, Tom. The breaths of fresh air nourish the soul.

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