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Walk Softly

I love the way you walk in your stilettos The clickety click sound of your heels The seductive sway of your hips And the luring gaze that appeals But when you walk softy That is what I love the best As your stilettos cover new territories Across my bony chest Oh the view my Soupies the view Of man’s weakness I do stare But never trust a woman in stilettos As your bit lay unattended and bare. Uhhhhhhhh! I am the Mad Poet. For Debbie Guzzi. (I never enter contests to win.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/28/2014 3:25:00 PM
Hehe you always have a twist to yours Sidney ;) enjoyed this! Hope you are doing good
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Date: 11/30/2013 7:34:00 PM
LOL for me?? Well I suppose its OK but which holiday is it for? Mother Night? LOL
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:07:00 AM
Mad Poet...this is a a naughty but nice write! :) Beware of those stilettos or you could get in trouble...Thanks for your visit and lovely post on my poem, My Jiggly Bits. It was much appreciated!
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Date: 8/14/2013 9:01:00 PM
Hey, sawubona, homeboy!! Long time to hear. Good to have you and your talent back. How have you been, mad one? Licia :-)
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Date: 8/14/2013 2:23:00 PM
Ah yes, I REMEMBER you. Good to see you back, and I love this naughty little poem! Great ending on it.
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Date: 8/14/2013 10:13:00 AM
Hello Mad poet :) I loved this wonderful poem...u know how to blend the words together with perfection. Hope u remember ur old friends red
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Date: 8/14/2013 8:50:00 AM
Good Morning Mad Poet... :-) a sweet look into your eyes, and what they seem to believe (or be deceived)... I have a thought, never trust a woman in black tights and a SMILE... LOL, JK. Stilettos, are not comfortable at all. I use to wear heels, stilettos, and gogo boots..... But, them days are gone, for the moment. People can trust me now... hahahahaah! take care.... PD
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:16:00 AM
Hey Syd just stopping by to let you know I do like the verse YET rhyme is not a form for this contest, only Sedoka ,SIJO, dodoitsu, ..also there doesn't seem to be any connection with Japan or Korea? Light & Love
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:04:00 AM
- Really beautiful,I hope you win! - Good Luck!!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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