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Walk Softly

I love the way you walk in your stilettos
The clickety click sound of your heels 
The seductive sway of your hips 
And the luring gaze that appeals

But when you walk softy
That is what I love the best
As your stilettos cover new territories 
Across my bony chest

Oh the view my Soupies the view
Of man’s weakness I do stare
But never trust a woman in stilettos
As your bit lay unattended and bare.

Uhhhhhhhh!


 I am the Mad Poet. For Debbie Guzzi.  (I never enter contests to win.)

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Wilma Neels

Date: 8/28/2014 3:25:00 PM

Hehe you always have a twist to yours Sidney ;) enjoyed this! Hope you are doing good

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2013 7:34:00 PM

LOL for me?? Well I suppose its OK but which holiday is it for? Mother Night? LOL

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2013 3:07:00 AM

Mad Poet...this is a a naughty but nice write! :) Beware of those stilettos or you could get in trouble...Thanks for your visit and lovely post on my poem, My Jiggly Bits. It was much appreciated!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/14/2013 9:01:00 PM

Hey, sawubona, homeboy!! Long time to hear. Good to have you and your talent back. How have you been, mad one? Licia :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2013 2:23:00 PM

Ah yes, I REMEMBER you. Good to see you back, and I love this naughty little poem! Great ending on it.

Red Fiery

Date: 8/14/2013 10:13:00 AM

Hello Mad poet :) I loved this wonderful poem...u know how to blend the words together with perfection. Hope u remember ur old friends red

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2013 8:50:00 AM

Good Morning Mad Poet... :-) a sweet look into your eyes, and what they seem to believe (or be deceived)... I have a thought, never trust a woman in black tights and a SMILE... LOL, JK. Stilettos, are not comfortable at all. I use to wear heels, stilettos, and gogo boots..... But, them days are gone, for the moment. People can trust me now... hahahahaah! take care.... PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2013 7:16:00 AM

Hey Syd just stopping by to let you know I do like the verse YET rhyme is not a form for this contest, only Sedoka ,SIJO, dodoitsu, ..also there doesn't seem to be any connection with Japan or Korea? Light & Love