Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Walk Like a Penguin

Since getting old, I now walk like a penguin
Wobbling describes it, could be water retention
All that being said
More that I dread
A load in my nighty causing much hypertension

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Darlene De Beaulieu October 24, 2018 at 11:50 AM Hello Jack, your poem is cute and it made me laugh. Have a nice day my friend.xxxxx ooooooo Darlene De Beaulieu October 25, 2018 at 12:23 PM Yes it does. You made me giggle. Have a nice day my friend. xxxxxxxx-oooooooo. Jack Ellison October 24, 2018 at 12:10 PM A giggle a day keeps the doctor away!!! LOL XOXOX

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 24, 2018 at 10:01 AM Giggles <3 Jack Ellison October 24, 2018 at 10:28 AM The load in my nightie, I still have control! The water retention is MY problem!!! XOX RUN HAPPY, RUN... OOPS!

Tom Cunningham October 24, 2018 at 7:12 AM Your weather will soon be cold enough so you'll feel at home . Jack Ellison October 24, 2018 at 7:17 AM 83 years and counting... if I haven't gotten used to it by now???