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Written 7th January 2024

 

 

Walk in the Light

God forgives those who come to follow Him Desiring to be cleansed and freed from sin.
Since Adam and Eve ate from the wrong tree Sin’s built into mankind naturally An ongoing battle that's tough to fight Until one decides to walk in the Light. God’s the Father, our king and creator Faith redeemer, daily bread relator Wear His yoke upon you, thee of meek heart Living to love is a sacred fine art. Do not touch what us unclean, said the Lord Turn from dark to light with righteous accord With clean mind and a heart that's truly pure We belong in God's safe harbour for sure. Heaven on earth, created by God's hand Could anything be as grand as this land People that here on this planet do dwell Care for all things glorious God made well. Ascend the Lords mountain of divine grace View splendour of earth’s illustrious place Believers, the sons and daughters out there Will rest one day in ethereal care.
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Buhagiar Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 5:15 AM
God is compassionate. We walk the narrow path.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Thank you again dear Victor. Hugs, Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Awesome faith-based work. Thank you for sharing it with us. If only we could be what God desires us to be, this would be a very different world. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Thank you very much Sara, comments appreciated. Beryl
Poet Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Lovely poem about forgiveness and redemption offered by God to those who seek to follow Him and live a pure and righteous life, Belle. The concepts of sin, repentance, spiritual cleansing, and the ultimate reward of eternal salvation, inspirational poem. Thanks for your comment on my page.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Sotto, truly appreciated as always. Beryl
Bowring Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Such a truly beautiful, inspirational and uplifting poem dear Belle. I so enjoyed reading it. ‘ Living to love is a sacred fine art’ ‘ will rest one day in ethereal care’. Wonderful, reflective thoughts. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):)
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:13 PM
Many thanks Christina, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings in return to you :) :) Beryl
Ashley Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 4:44 PM
Dear Beryl, your faith is beautifully expressed in this spiritual poem. Such an inspiration! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:09 PM
Thank you dear Susan, warmest wishes in return to you. Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 2:17 AM
a very spiritual poem we should learn a lot from reading it.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Victor, very grateful as always. Blessings, Beryl
Baker Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 10:39 PM
Beautifully written poetry, Belle. The Spirit within speaks freely through your poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:06 PM
Thank you so much Bill, always a pleasure to receive comments from you. Blessings returned, Belle
One Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I can see your faith in your words Beryl.. It flows really well.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Thank yiu very much Silent One, very grateful as always. Blessings, Beryl
May Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:43 AM
We have been redeemed by the Lord, A beautiful verse of faith Beryl
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Many thanks Joseph for reading and commenting, your words are truly appreciated. Beryl
Empress Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 6:18 AM
“Believers, the sons and daughters out there Will rest one day in ethereal care.” So true and very well written, which shows and depicts your inner faith in such eloquence. I love how you’ve delivered this and reminded us all to follow light away from darkness something we all need to remember. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light today and always
Edmonds  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much Ink, your comments are a pleasure to treasure. Sending love and Light in return. Beryl
Mcintosh Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 2:48 AM
Oh, yes. Walk in the light. His light reflects the grace that makes hearts whole. God bless you. Love, Gina
Edmonds  Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you and God bless you too. Love, Belle
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