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Walk In My Sandals

there were words painting images at the back of my head and everyday I plucked them out to share, yet I couldn’t find you neither your shadow that I departed for the desert and took refuge in the shivers of my sandals

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 9:05:00 PM
gives me the shivers
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Date: 3/15/2009 4:09:00 AM
Deep, meditative, beautiful poem. I enjoyed the read, thanks for the write
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Date: 2/25/2009 7:01:00 PM
This is says so much in few words and you totally put your meaning out there. Wonderful write. Laurie
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:27:00 AM
Ernesto my friend - Very well written piece - Totally amazing - Always my pleasure, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:18:00 AM
This is an incredible piece of writing. So much reside in these words. Love the fourth stanza..great job!
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