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"wal-Marts" Georgia

Ol' Roy spoke right up without a care
So "Ceasar's" could plainly hear
"There is some ghastly stink over there
Where all those fish live my dear."

Well Goldie tried to  hush him by saying
"It is not coming from our corner
But at the garden center on open displaying
Cow Manure with a scent that is an awakener"

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/15/2010 8:08:00 AM

Hilarious, Sarah!...Maybe they should rearrange their stores and put Ceasars near the air fresheners department? I love going to Wal-Mart and always carefully listen and observe all those kooky, wonderful people - Tim

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/13/2010 2:27:00 PM

Hi Sarah Cute , clever , lovely , This poem relates to you comment about change , It carries the scent of cow manure

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/11/2010 10:51:00 AM

Funny rhyme you have here Sara--that must really be stinky all that cow poo ;) -- and I sure hope that your meds will help a lot in relieving your pain-- keeping you & your son in my thoughts & prayers indeed :) -- btw as for my *laustt* write-- hmm I'd call it "Nikko Spelling" perhaps? that is actually English in which I deliberately messed up the spelling ;) try reading it again I hope my spelling doesn't give you a headache though :) enjoy your day! nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2010 11:52:00 AM

Just had to stop back to tell you thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/10/2010 9:53:00 AM

Sara, now I understand your blog better.. Glad for the new management :) all the best for the contest.. Enjoy your day further, Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 8/10/2010 8:26:00 AM

Oops! I thought "Ceasar's" was a pizza parlor. Some would call that a "ghastly stink," but I call that heaven. Them Georgia Walmarts shore am careless. Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/10/2010 7:40:00 AM

For sure is, Sara!!! Really a funny write, enjoyed reading it! All the best and thank you for commenting "Lost Days"....Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2010 5:46:00 AM

Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Sara. I enjoyed reading your poetry today still laughing.. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2010 11:52:00 PM

funny one...I can see the stuff in the store trying to find the culprit.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/9/2010 8:06:00 PM

A nice humorous conversations, Sara. Good luck

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/9/2010 5:37:00 PM

At least the garden dept is usually placed far enough away from the groceries!! That wouldn't be very appetizing to smell manure while buying groceries! Cute one, Sara! ~ love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/9/2010 5:20:00 PM

Oh no, say it isn't so, Sara! Cow manure scents eminating from in the garden center...well at least it's not in the produce department. There you just smell rotting bananas. This is a hoot! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn