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Waking Up With Tea and Coffee

A soft hand of warm sunshine caressing A slight sweet sip in olfactory glee In lovely envy looking our jasmine At gorgeous cups of morning-blended tea The flavor of day break nicely matches With ingrained Darjeeling touch in the cup As your ear lobes with lips soft sun catches In light brown tea, smile the cups, full of love At evening a lovely laze in coffee A roasted flavor from the black liquid The sun dipping in its twilight beauty Do come, let’s as much as we can, hold it The charming flavors of green optimism Time writing poetry in liquid rhythm ________________________________________ 7/12/2016 Note: By morning-blended, I mean the very morning moments are blended in the tea

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Date: 12/11/2016 4:51:00 AM
Sweet sonnet Probir, albeit I prefer my coffee bitter. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/11/2016 5:24:00 AM
Me too ... in our friend circle we call it 'infusion' ... we have about a century old coffee house in college street ... if I say to the waiter, an infusion please, he will bring a light black coffee ... however, glad you like the poem ... thank you ...
Date: 12/7/2016 10:41:00 PM
Ah! Probir a beautiful sonnet, my favourite form of poetry and you have done it proud, I am about to make Peter and I a cup of Hazelnut Coffee so I chose this poem at the right time, but I don't think his ear lobes will touch my lips.LOL, thank you so much for sharing my friend and take care.......Vera
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:11:00 PM
Ha ha ... Neither mine ! ... Thanks ...
Date: 12/7/2016 6:14:00 PM
what a lovely sonnet Probir I am a tea lover not coffee... :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2016 7:36:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
a beautiful sonnets worth more sips of a read, probir... huggs
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Date: 12/7/2016 7:39:00 PM
Glad you like ... Thanks ...
Date: 12/7/2016 8:43:00 AM
Probir, there is a lovely, lilting, liquid (no pun intended) quality to this.
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:23:00 AM
I am honoured ... Thank you, Doug ...
Date: 12/7/2016 8:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, I love the last line. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve 7
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/7/2016 8:01:00 AM
Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/7/2016 7:49:00 AM
Nice one Probir, really well written. Have a boo at mine just posted called Coffee for the same contest. Good luck.
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:24:00 AM
thank you ...
Date: 12/7/2016 7:44:00 AM
Hi Probir, What a lovely sonnet. Great imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:24:00 AM
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