waking on dew

waking on dew
  young magnolias rise
from strokes of tinseled light

each bloom becomes a forest --
  in watercolor gold
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Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Absolutely gorgeous. You deserved to be on this winner list
Derden Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 5:15 PM
This is exquisite—your imagery glows with quiet magic.
Bayles Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 7:33 PM
Great imagery, Nette.
Hind Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Absolutely breathtaking. Nette. Really is! <3
Miller Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:24 AM
Just excellent, congratulations
Sharma Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:14 AM
Mesmerizing and so thoughtful and amazing to ponder that tiny seeds turn to forests!! Congratulations.
Rodgers Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Dear Nette, I love the imagery for it creates such a delicate and incredible scene. I think it feels so fresh and full of life, just like a morning after a rain. Blessings, Nette, Daniel
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