Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Waking At Peace

Good morning sunshine
Caress my sleepy head
I hear the birds sing
There is a chill in the air

Love is good
I feel well
Ease has sprouted
Among my joints today
Carry me away to gentle waves

Healing sunshine
Healthy food
Clean, uncluttered home

I love waking up next to you, like you love waking up next to me!!

For Carol Brown--My state of happiness, sure bliss!!

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James Fraser July 14, 2010 at 12:01 PM Lovely poetry Doris, congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James

John Freeman July 13, 2010 at 8:50 PM Congratulations, Doris on your poem's success in Carol's competition. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2010 at 6:53 PM Congrats Doris on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and a special honor for u to so enjoy my friend.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2010 at 4:43 PM Congratulations Doris on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol

Heather Hill June 23, 2010 at 5:55 PM Cute write, thanks for sharing and commenting on my work!! :)

Linda Milgate June 20, 2010 at 10:39 AM A lovely morning thank you.

Ralph Taylor June 15, 2010 at 4:31 PM Awesome, Doris. Great write. Thanks for your comments. Have a good one, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A June 15, 2010 at 12:23 PM A sure bliss you seem to be in with that person you wake up to, such a sweet write, enjoyed your writel...P.D.

Kevin Semeniuk June 14, 2010 at 2:51 PM wonderful poem!..

Sara Kendrick June 14, 2010 at 7:55 AM Great thoughts that you have penned in this one...Nice to have a clean home and love to go around..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for all the comments...Have you noticed that they have changed to stating the number of times that your work has been viewed instead of number of comments...P.D. suggested this...Mom

Patricia Gregory June 14, 2010 at 6:57 AM AWESOME!!! Really AWESOME!!!! Keep up the great work

Harry Horsman June 13, 2010 at 9:51 PM wonderful poem so full of feeling harry

Rachel W June 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM I always love to hear people are happy! Enjoy, what I hope, is an endless array of mornings filled with contentment.

David Byrne June 13, 2010 at 5:26 PM lovely and chirpy!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2010 at 4:23 PM HOw very nice, I like this state to be in!! it's all we can and ShOULD be asking for. Where do you live to enjoyyour warm weather right now? Utah sucks this month! LUv, andrea

Gert W. Knop June 12, 2010 at 6:45 AM What a tribute, Doris! Wish you best of luck for Carol's contest! And thank you for your kind comments...Have a nice weekend...Gert

David Byrne June 11, 2010 at 9:05 PM very warm!

Joseph Spence Sr June 11, 2010 at 9:46 AM This is wonderful. I like the twist in the last lines about walking up. Good luck in the contest. Great job! Joseph

Lynette Chachere June 10, 2010 at 6:18 PM what a beautiful sunshine to wake up to. at least you have bliss when you awake after dawn(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Richard-Jamaal Keen June 9, 2010 at 10:18 PM very soothing, i need days like this lol

Carolyn Devonshire June 9, 2010 at 8:56 PM What a soothing and refreshing poem, Doris! Wonderful imagery and strong emotion as well. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2010 at 7:47 PM very lovely Doris, what a delight to read a happy lifter at this time. Enjoyed, and have a nice one,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2010 at 7:43 PM A wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck