Waking At Peace

Good morning sunshine
Caress my sleepy head
I hear the birds sing
There is a chill in the air

Love is good
I feel well
Ease has sprouted
Among my joints today
Carry me away to gentle waves

Healing sunshine
Healthy food
Clean, uncluttered home

I love waking up next to you, like you love waking up next to me!!

For Carol Brown--My state of happiness, sure bliss!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/14/2010 12:01:00 PM
Lovely poetry Doris, congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Doris on your poem's success in Carol's competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:53:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and a special honor for u to so enjoy my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations Doris on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:55:00 PM
Cute write, thanks for sharing and commenting on my work!! :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 10:39:00 AM
A lovely morning thank you.
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:31:00 PM
Awesome, Doris. Great write. Thanks for your comments. Have a good one, Ralph
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:23:00 PM
A sure bliss you seem to be in with that person you wake up to, such a sweet write, enjoyed your writel...P.D.
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Date: 6/14/2010 2:51:00 PM
wonderful poem!..
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:55:00 AM
Great thoughts that you have penned in this one...Nice to have a clean home and love to go around..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for all the comments...Have you noticed that they have changed to stating the number of times that your work has been viewed instead of number of comments...P.D. suggested this...Mom
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:57:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Really AWESOME!!!! Keep up the great work
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:51:00 PM
wonderful poem so full of feeling harry
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:49:00 PM
I always love to hear people are happy! Enjoy, what I hope, is an endless array of mornings filled with contentment.
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:26:00 PM
lovely and chirpy!
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:23:00 PM
HOw very nice, I like this state to be in!! it's all we can and ShOULD be asking for. Where do you live to enjoyyour warm weather right now? Utah sucks this month! LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:45:00 AM
What a tribute, Doris! Wish you best of luck for Carol's contest! And thank you for your kind comments...Have a nice weekend...Gert
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:05:00 PM
very warm!
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:46:00 AM
This is wonderful. I like the twist in the last lines about walking up. Good luck in the contest. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:18:00 PM
what a beautiful sunshine to wake up to. at least you have bliss when you awake after dawn(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/9/2010 10:18:00 PM
very soothing, i need days like this lol
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Date: 6/9/2010 8:56:00 PM
What a soothing and refreshing poem, Doris! Wonderful imagery and strong emotion as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2010 7:47:00 PM
very lovely Doris, what a delight to read a happy lifter at this time. Enjoyed, and have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/9/2010 7:43:00 PM
A wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck
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