Waking Hour

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Date written: 05/17/2024

birds sing on wing big yawn at dawn sun's out no doubt sunrise rubs eyes gets up makes cup... of tea, felt free!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2024 3:32:00 PM

Hello Edward, We all need our cup of coffee or tea to begin our day. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 11:25:00 AM

Hello, Edward, I begin my day with coffee. i make a pot and slowly drain the whole pot of coffee. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/27/2024 5:45:00 PM

True indeed, Darlene! I never start my mornings without a cup of coffee. Thanks for dropping by, my friend.

David Crandall

Date: 5/17/2024 7:48:00 PM

Nice concise poem Edward!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/27/2024 5:46:00 PM

Thank you, David! Sorry for the late reply.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/17/2024 5:32:00 AM

Succinct pairs deliver brilliantly, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/17/2024 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)