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Wake Up Now

The wind howled, in an animal way, as the snow piled high, on this winter's day. (christy hardy) The erie noise, chilled to the bone, or was it the temperature. I felt so alone. (laurie ginn) Treading along dead tired, the blood in my veins had dried, in the white snow I started to see only grey, would I live to see the sun brighten another day. (manoi kumar) A strange warm feeling, suddenly came over me, and as I looked up a familiar radiant figure, spoke secrets silently. (sharon weimer) The voice was telling me, you are not alone, wake up now, you've been dreaming all along. (christy hardy) Please, help me finish this poem. and we need a title......

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Date: 1/9/2009 12:26:00 PM
You are right and some of the stuff Ihave used from other poets. From here on I will give plenty of credit. Great read from a great poet.
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Date: 1/7/2009 11:46:00 AM
a strange warm feeling/ suddenly came over me/ and as i looked up/ a familiar radiant figure/ spoke secrets silently
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Date: 1/6/2009 7:44:00 PM
The erie noise/ chilled to the bone/ or was it the temperature/ I felt so alone
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