Wake up Earth

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Wake up Earth, the wind has changed, the clouds lost their direction, the sun is scorching, the rain makes its appearance as an artist. Wake up Earth, the green is becoming brown, the landscapes are getting dress with the deserts' sand, the fires are painting forests with ashes, the birds fly lost without a rhythm to follow. Wake up Earth, the sea animals are committing suicide for no apparent reason. Travelling to nowhere, just to be death on the fantasy beaches for blind people to rejoice. Wake up people, don't let the others to solve what you should do, politicians fill their pockets while they share "Seducing talks" with no facts to satisfied. Meanwhile, the whole world is an irremediable disaster without control. Wake up Earth, don't sleep too long, your wonderland will be your hell before you can get dressed on.

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Robert Warlov

Date: 9/24/2024 12:56:00 PM

Oh chastened Earth, may your counter-strike rage! [[ See: "When the river fails" ~ https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/when_the_river_fails_1004942 ]]

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 8:31:00 AM

Loved your dig against politicians. Here we are under a corrupt government and we pray for a change. Your poem touches so many important aspects of this world. Rain is necessary. Glad you get some occasionally. Lovely poem, my friend. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/22/2024 12:54:00 AM

My dear Victor, nowadays it looks like the Governments are corrupted everywhere. Here is the same story. We nearly have more politicians than people, and all are the same. This world is running in a wrong direction. Thank you very much for your lovely words. I hope you have a great week. Walk on the shadow. Here, it also starts to be hot these days. Blessings my friend.!