Wake Up

The electric jolt of the city stops 
It bows like a sapling in a February storm
The thirsty windows collect the drops 

The heart, the pulse of the place— still warm
Still whispering behind doors, under grates
Beyond the snowy garrison of the city, Spring swarms

Over the yawning, gushing streams the melt creates
Near the child with the mud covered sneakers 
The icy mist that lingered dissipates 

Blooming from trees, fresh buds are sweepers 
Brushing off the flecks of dirt and snow 
They become the season’s youngest keepers 

A wind to break the back does blow! 
A new era is but a stone’s throw! 


~For Regina McIntosh’s contest “Heart Universes”
  Tuesday, February 9th, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Nicole Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 2:33 PM
"The thirsty windows collect the drops, blooming from trees, fresh buds are sweepers" Such a lovely image. Makes me think of Spring. Patiently, I am waiting. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
Martin Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Hey thanks Brandy! Those were two of my favorite lines to write as well
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:17 AM
I really like the last stanza. Yes, a new era can be born. Sara
Martin Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:20 PM
Thank you so much Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:16 PM
wow, a gorgeous read this is, Jeremy!
Martin Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Aw thanks Andrea! Means a lot
Woodrow Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 5:27 PM
such a lovely spring read! very atmospheric and great descriptions :)
Martin Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Thanks Susan! I can’t waitttt for spring
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