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The electric jolt of the city stops It bows like a sapling in a February storm The thirsty windows collect the drops The heart, the pulse of the place— still warm Still whispering behind doors, under grates Beyond the snowy garrison of the city, Spring swarms Over the yawning, gushing streams the melt creates Near the child with the mud covered sneakers The icy mist that lingered dissipates Blooming from trees, fresh buds are sweepers Brushing off the flecks of dirt and snow They become the season’s youngest keepers A wind to break the back does blow! A new era is but a stone’s throw! ~For Regina McIntosh’s contest “Heart Universes” Tuesday, February 9th, 2021

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Date: 2/16/2021 2:33:00 PM
"The thirsty windows collect the drops, blooming from trees, fresh buds are sweepers" Such a lovely image. Makes me think of Spring. Patiently, I am waiting. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. :) Brandy
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/22/2021 6:15:00 PM
Hey thanks Brandy! Those were two of my favorite lines to write as well
Date: 2/14/2021 8:17:00 AM
I really like the last stanza. Yes, a new era can be born. Sara
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/15/2021 10:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara!
Date: 2/10/2021 2:16:00 PM
wow, a gorgeous read this is, Jeremy!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/10/2021 8:12:00 PM
Aw thanks Andrea! Means a lot
Date: 2/9/2021 5:27:00 PM
such a lovely spring read! very atmospheric and great descriptions :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/9/2021 11:41:00 PM
Thanks Susan! I can’t waitttt for spring

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