Barbara Gorelick Poet Alliteration

Waiting---Alliteration

Wistfully waiting and watching
at the window, wishing  and 
wondering. Will all this 
wanting be wasted?

The evening embraces my
empty arms, and eventually
the essence of  exquisite 
pain exudes from my eyes..

Our fabric of our future
is faded , the feature of
my fantasy was fabricated
 from a fevered fight for
a fresh start..

Oh, be gone you beast, bewitch
another...I, a bystander now,
bequeath this boulevard of
bones, to a better belle 
than I..

For the Alliteration contest

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 9, 2013 at 4:50 PM I like this breath taking piece. Big Congrats Barbara~A.O

Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2013 at 8:04 PM Barbara, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA

Jack Horne March 17, 2013 at 11:40 AM love this, my friend - sure winner here

Connie Gildersleeve March 17, 2013 at 8:01 AM Nicely done Barbara. I love the tongue-tied verses. I warm Smiles Always, Connie

Ravi Sathasivam March 17, 2013 at 6:29 AM "The evening embraces my empty arms, and eventually the essence of exquisite pain exudes from my eyes.." ... beautifully said. Excellent poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Carrie Richards March 15, 2013 at 7:06 PM I just finished tying my tongue in a knot........all thanks to you!! If I could talk, I would say "Great poem, Barbara!"