Waiting To Hatch

it's been so long that
i'd completely forgotten
and now it seems
a battered weathered wreck
on the verge of change
things not to be spoken of yet

stan sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 4:01 PM
On the cusp of change is a tricky line to walk, thought-provoking!
Blown Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 4:37 PM
thanks for the comment...i tend to feel a little misplaced with respect to time : )
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