Waiting : Stephanie Deshpande Painting Contest

I sit and wait
The hands of the clock move slowly forward
Already five minutes late
What is the delay, maybe the car he borrowed
Has broken down, so I sit and wait.

He left my Mam and me
A new family for him these days
Supposedly he must come and see
That I am alright, though he doesn’t pay
I sit and wait

All dressed up as though I care
Bathed and dressed in Sunday best
Hair washed a ribbon added to give flair
I sit and wait again
As I have done many times before

An hour has passed once more no show
I sit and wait
How many times is this allowed to go
When can I not get ready for my Dad
He walked away and broke my heart


From now on a new life I will start
No more waiting for his time to come
Dad’s life, I am no longer a part
Mam and I have a new home
I sit and wait no more

This time he came
No longer had I waited
I was not at home
In his life I no longer participate
I sit and wait no more.


Penned February 2nd 2014

Inspired by the painting  by Stephanie Deshpande  - Waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Very sad Seren. I cant fathom doing that to a child
Neumann Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 9:48 AM
This is a heartfelt poem and very well written. Betrayal and disappointment. I wish you the best, Kai
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February 26, 2014 at 9:41 PM
So sorry for this late congrats.. but it does come with some amazing news, news I'm sure an artist, like you, will truly enjoy. Stephanie Despande has provided a link to the winning poems on HER OWN BLOG.http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/contemporary-free-rhyme-poetry-contest/ Isn't this amazing? Huge Smile from Cyndi
Guzzi Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 7:50 PM
It's horrid I know, my Dad even left the country! for 20 years out of the USA BUT he did come back & for years now we have had a loving relationship again, so do have hope! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Sivey Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 10:33 PM
This is a very powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! You created an outstanding poem by the twist you awesomely made! I loved the way you took the piece! What a delightful verse! Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Russell, Glad you liked it ...Seren
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