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Waiting Sings Along With Torment

WAITING SINGS ALONG WITH TORMENT

Each night aroma of jonquils arrive to tickle me
yet no console as I am a slave to your absence
as bright full moon slowly slit the dormant sea
in the field of black, hours, I crave for your essence.

The cold breeze of December can send the shivers
running intermittent into my back but  weak  for  within
I am frozen waiting for the warmth you alone can deliver.
Today, later morning or a day after, I want to begin

shedding suffering, choosing long patience in between.
You imprisoned my heart since the day we declared love,
our love silenced jazzy heartbeats, we feel so green,
the hundred memories we shared white as dove.

I am to wait even if waiting sings along with torment
for I believe the promise we said is pure of intent
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==CONTEST NAME: WAITING==
=Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish=
~~2nd Place~~
6:43 PM, September 10, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Robert Lindley Date: 9/27/2015 12:01:00 AM I see this gem won in a contest and can easily see why! "Each night aroma of jonquils arrive to tickle me yet no console as I am a slave to your absence as bright full moon slowly slit the dormant sea in the field of black, hours, I crave for your essence." ^^ Pure gold. A7 Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/23/2015 1:50:00 PM Souper douper congrats on your win little one :-) hugs always//James xxx Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/22/2015 7:07:00 PM Olive, congratulations on your win. SKAT Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/22/2015 1:06:00 AM Wonderful expressions Olive! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 9/21/2015 11:54:00 AM Ang ganda! Awesome last two lines... sincerity in every sinew. Congrats, Olive! hugs! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/20/2015 4:06:00 PM Olive ,congratulations your win:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2015 1:14:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 9/19/2015 7:03:00 AM Love is like that! Your poetry is beautiful. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 9/15/2015 4:03:00 PM Beautiful poem on love, done well. 7 too. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/10/2015 1:19:00 AM thanks much BL.. =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2015 5:02:00 AM - Olive, so beautiful and lovely to read your warm thoughts - (a 7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/24/2015 5:49:00 AM Thanks much Anne Lise.. =`) I feel good when I wrote this one.. =`)

Jerry T Curtis Date: 9/12/2015 6:28:00 AM This is a beautiful piece Olive, gets a seven from me too Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/23/2015 8:05:00 AM thanks Jerry.. =`)

Etienne Lariviere Date: 9/11/2015 2:46:00 PM tres belle! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/23/2015 8:03:00 AM thanks much Etienne.. =`)

Michael Tor Date: 9/11/2015 5:48:00 AM This is so beautiful and touching. Commitment till the end. Great affection and love shown here. Nice work Olive. A seven for sure. Congrats. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/21/2015 3:53:00 AM Thank you so much Michael.. I am pleased that you like this one.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/11/2015 2:52:00 AM A lovely write......A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/20/2015 2:34:00 AM Afolabi thank you so much.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2015 9:12:00 PM It must be love. An emotive poem of passion, Olive. Well done. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/15/2015 4:39:00 AM Thank you so much Andie... =`) yes it must be love.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/10/2015 6:10:00 PM I love how this was constructed dear poet.... I flows smoothly within the readers mind and sense...........A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/14/2015 2:57:00 AM thanks much Afolabi.. =`) glad you like it.. `)

James Fraser Date: 9/10/2015 2:29:00 PM Beautiful words gliding on the thermals of love little one. Soon distance shall be of metre's, inches or feet, for ideas, words we'll greet, onto the paper our quills shall meet. The more one reads this, the more one absorbs this gem~hugs~your Huge One//James tmf's xxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/13/2015 3:23:00 AM Huge James, Yes so soon... excited and praying fervently ... warm tight hugsxxx~Olive ELoisa your little one .. =`)

Darlene Gifford Date: 9/10/2015 11:25:00 AM The love you write about is heart warming and endearing. May God bless and strengthen this relationship. And thanks for reading one of my poems. <3 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/13/2015 3:20:00 AM Darlene, thank you so much for dropping by and leaving a most wonderful comment and wish..~Olive ELoisa =`)

Tim Smith Date: 9/10/2015 11:19:00 AM Absence makes the heart beat stronger Olive. The waiting will be worth it. good luck Tim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/13/2015 3:17:00 AM waiting is all worth and each side is committed and true.. Thanks Tim ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus Date: 9/10/2015 11:09:00 AM There is no mistaking that love is in the air, connecting two hearts across the miles. Waiting can be a torment, but the promise of declared love is worth the sacrifice:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/11/2015 3:53:00 AM ~~It's hard to deny or hide it no more when it is too obvious.. Yes, all worth the wait Paul,,hugs~~Olive Eloisa

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 9/10/2015 8:08:00 AM Ah the joys of love. You have captured them well. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/10/2015 8:16:00 PM Scott, thank you so much... yes the joys of love overcomes all sufferings... ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Jan Allison Date: 9/10/2015 6:47:00 AM Such beautiful romantic imagery Olive - the waiting will be over soon my friend and you will be together forever:-) hugs jan xx 7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/10/2015 8:15:00 PM Weeee, In a way the theme is true to me that somehow the lines just spoke of my heart.... thanks much Jan.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)