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WAITING SINGS ALONG WITH TORMENT Each night aroma of jonquils arrive to tickle me yet no console as I am a slave to your absence as bright full moon slowly slit the dormant sea in the field of black, hours, I crave for your essence. The cold breeze of December can send the shivers running intermittent into my back but weak for within I am frozen waiting for the warmth you alone can deliver. Today, later morning or a day after, I want to begin shedding suffering, choosing long patience in between. You imprisoned my heart since the day we declared love, our love silenced jazzy heartbeats, we feel so green, the hundred memories we shared white as dove. I am to wait even if waiting sings along with torment for I believe the promise we said is pure of intent __________________________________________________ ==CONTEST NAME: WAITING== =Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish= ~~2nd Place~~ 6:43 PM, September 10, 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/27/2015 12:01:00 AM

I see this gem won in a contest and can easily see why! "Each night aroma of jonquils arrive to tickle me yet no console as I am a slave to your absence as bright full moon slowly slit the dormant sea in the field of black, hours, I crave for your essence." ^^ Pure gold. A7

James Fraser

Date: 9/23/2015 1:50:00 PM

Souper douper congrats on your win little one :-) hugs always//James xxx

Skat A

Date: 9/22/2015 7:07:00 PM

Olive, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/22/2015 1:06:00 AM

Wonderful expressions Olive! Congrats on big win!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/21/2015 11:54:00 AM

Ang ganda! Awesome last two lines... sincerity in every sinew. Congrats, Olive! hugs!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/20/2015 4:06:00 PM

Olive ,congratulations your win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2015 1:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/19/2015 7:03:00 AM

Love is like that! Your poetry is beautiful.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/15/2015 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful poem on love, done well. 7 too. Loved always,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/10/2015 1:19:00 AM

thanks much BL.. =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2015 5:02:00 AM

- Olive, so beautiful and lovely to read your warm thoughts - (a 7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/24/2015 5:49:00 AM

Thanks much Anne Lise.. =`) I feel good when I wrote this one.. =`)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/12/2015 6:28:00 AM

This is a beautiful piece Olive, gets a seven from me too

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 8:05:00 AM

thanks Jerry.. =`)

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 9/11/2015 2:46:00 PM

tres belle!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 8:03:00 AM

thanks much Etienne.. =`)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/11/2015 5:48:00 AM

This is so beautiful and touching. Commitment till the end. Great affection and love shown here. Nice work Olive. A seven for sure. Congrats.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2015 3:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Michael.. I am pleased that you like this one.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/11/2015 2:52:00 AM

A lovely write......A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/20/2015 2:34:00 AM

Afolabi thank you so much.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2015 9:12:00 PM

It must be love. An emotive poem of passion, Olive. Well done.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/15/2015 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Andie... =`) yes it must be love.. =`)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/10/2015 6:10:00 PM

I love how this was constructed dear poet.... I flows smoothly within the readers mind and sense...........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2015 2:57:00 AM

thanks much Afolabi.. =`) glad you like it.. `)

James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2015 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful words gliding on the thermals of love little one. Soon distance shall be of metre's, inches or feet, for ideas, words we'll greet, onto the paper our quills shall meet. The more one reads this, the more one absorbs this gem~hugs~your Huge One//James tmf's xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:23:00 AM

Huge James, Yes so soon... excited and praying fervently ... warm tight hugsxxx~Olive ELoisa your little one .. =`)

Darlene Gifford

Date: 9/10/2015 11:25:00 AM

The love you write about is heart warming and endearing. May God bless and strengthen this relationship. And thanks for reading one of my poems. <3

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:20:00 AM

Darlene, thank you so much for dropping by and leaving a most wonderful comment and wish..~Olive ELoisa =`)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2015 11:19:00 AM

Absence makes the heart beat stronger Olive. The waiting will be worth it. good luck Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:17:00 AM

waiting is all worth and each side is committed and true.. Thanks Tim ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2015 11:09:00 AM

There is no mistaking that love is in the air, connecting two hearts across the miles. Waiting can be a torment, but the promise of declared love is worth the sacrifice:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2015 3:53:00 AM

~~It's hard to deny or hide it no more when it is too obvious.. Yes, all worth the wait Paul,,hugs~~Olive Eloisa

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/10/2015 8:08:00 AM

Ah the joys of love. You have captured them well.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/10/2015 8:16:00 PM

Scott, thank you so much... yes the joys of love overcomes all sufferings... ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2015 6:47:00 AM

Such beautiful romantic imagery Olive - the waiting will be over soon my friend and you will be together forever:-) hugs jan xx 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/10/2015 8:15:00 PM

Weeee, In a way the theme is true to me that somehow the lines just spoke of my heart.... thanks much Jan.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)