"waiting On You"

The breeze passes through me on this hot afternoon....
Waiting and searching for some gems of words from a spoon....
The passing flies seem to know their way, a lasting impression
with still not much to say....
These lost souls make their way around,
like unfocused mirrors of a sadly worn clown....
My head peaks up to see if you are there, 
I'm trying to write but I need your air...
No clouds in the sky as I find shade under a tree, 
little glows of hope but I still stay free...
The conversations are faint as my longing starts to overtake, 
off in the distance she walks to me as my yearning starts to bake....
Closer and closer till I hear your sweet voice, 
to take this time and run with it is our only choice...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Blakeley Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Michael..it is obvious..you appreciate women . I like that.
A   Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 2:46 PM
a willing wait for a love to not be lost,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
Devonshire Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 2:32 AM
When that special person enters our lives, our world changes. Truly, you SHOULD take this time and run with it! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 5:20 PM
great job, enjoyed
Hales Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 10:42 AM
You are the twinkle of every girls eye ... You are the charmer of the writes Sarah x
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