Waiting For What - Haibun Contest

They wait, waiting to break the law of any country, they rush in their thousands to gain access to the tunnel**.  Why, what do they envisage is at the end, a pot of gold, reality is another camp, until they are sent back to country of origin.  These are the poor people who have tried to reach the shores of the UK.  Spent their meagre savings to reach this goal,

it stands for freedom
dark mouth, with forbidden depth……
sign says your welcome

**  referring to the Tunnel at Calais that connects UK to rest of  Europe, thousands of  refugees  are  waiting to enter illegally by storming the tunnel or hiding in back of a lorries.  So Sad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Interesting work..I need to look this up and see exactly what is going on..I guess I am behind times..Congrats on your win..Sara
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Sara it's heartbreaking watching the news, seeing all these people desperate to reach the UK. We cant take them all, we are but a small island, thanks for taking an interest,,,,Seren
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 9:04 AM
As a stand alone haiku that is one eerie write. Your thoughts on the plight of refugees are so very true. Nicely done, thanks for bringing this poem to my contest.
Roberts Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:43 AM
thank you Scott, your comments are appreciated...Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Congrats on another wonderful win Seren with this amazing haibun!
Roberts Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:49 AM
Dr Upma your comments so much appreciated....Seren
A  Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Seren, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
Roberts Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:45 AM
thank you Skat...Seren
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Its so sad watching the news Seren many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:44 AM
it is sad Jan, yet still they come ...............Seren
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