Waiting For the Moon

The sun already came
     Bright and early
And then smoothly it left as was its arrival
The moon hasn't arrived yet
It's running late
The still dark night awaits 
Two love hearts lay in the dark waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mumo Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 7:33 AM
The queen of verse is ever on spot. The moon should soon emerge to its defense!
Hunjeri Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:48 AM
Lol thanks mumo
Gray Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Lovely piece Njeri, great imagery !. Best regards my friend!.
Hunjeri Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Thank you Bill. Good day.
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 11:45 PM
OH....how sweet!!! Love how you wrote about the sun and moon. I love both!!! And love? Well...that's the best part. Hugs
Hunjeri Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Lol, thank you Jade for your sweet comment. Good day my friend
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