Waiting For Rain To Stop

WAITING  FOR  RAIN  TO  STOP




Down the misted glass door
Droplets patter erratically
Approaching the bottom of the pane
With arthritic pain as their path
Hesitates or stops at spots
Of dirt or dust
In the dusk of an autumn
Monday, solemn with gloom
As I wait for the pattern 
On the glass to cease
Moving, and the sound
Tick, tick, from the 
Tiny strikes of drops
To stop, and only the 
Wind to sing along the
Wetted pane turning dry.

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Written for and entered in
 
Carol  Brown's  Contest 	RAINDROPS FALLING
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Alvez Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 2:48 AM
Beautiful! Love this painting with words. I love the rain... Cynthia
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 11:28 AM
SIDNEY, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
Guzzi Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 11:46 AM
ahhhhhhh serenity in words...loved the personification...Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 8:50 PM
I enjoyed the journey. Congratulations on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations Sid do you live close to me we have been waiting for it to stop all summer,super win xx
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Sidney. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 8:35 AM
A very good poem for the contest Sidney, wish you luck and hope for a win for your poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hoover Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Very nice write!
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