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Waiting For God: Oh

At my breakfast table, a ghost Has just opened all of my post What’s his caper That’s my paper He’s now got his teeth in my toast

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/9/2022 11:45:00 PM

I'm very curious as to what spread you had on your toast. Lol. Tom Found Vegemite in morrisons and have tried it a couple of times, I don't think it has that tangy taste like marmite but I'll persevere, I noticed in a comment you made about marmite having a high salt content but they do one with a reduced salt content. They brought out a guinness one a while back, I was in heaven. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom

Terry Flood
Date: 1/11/2022 4:17:00 PM

You haven’t got shares in Marmite, have you, Tom?

Jan Allison

Date: 1/9/2022 4:41:00 PM

ha ha ha and the title is pure genius!

Terry Flood
Date: 1/9/2022 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. The title was my favourite bit, too. Took me a little while to think it up… just kept thinking, who is watching who here… and then ‘PING!’