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Waiting For Eternal Sleep

WAITING FOR ETERNAL SLEEP The journey began with sunrise promise On the garden path of beautiful life, The flowers bloomed, destiny in disguise Brushed calm colors on the drab times of strife. The path at edge of horizon unclear I traveled for long, exhausted and thirsty, The music of the setting sun I hear My heart plays the tune of melancholy. Daylight would disappear for night would fall Your stretched arms my sleepy eyes could see. I’m tired, it’s time you hear my final call, Come, to the abode of bliss you take me. No more promises I now have to keep, I plead, put me to this eternal sleep. May 16, 2018 Contest : A Poem About Death Sponsored by : Broken Wings Theme : This Eternal Sleep

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/7/2018 4:40:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Subimal. Truly haunting yet simultaneously enchanting, a combination hard to achieve---but you've done it. Best wishes, Gershon

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/8/2018 1:55:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon for revisit and for your comments.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/3/2018 12:43:00 AM

Back again to congratulate you again for your win again!! #1 win! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/3/2018 3:11:00 AM

Many thanks, Susan for the revisit.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/2/2018 4:24:00 PM

A beautiful Sonnet, Subimal, that speaks to the thoughts of all of us as we await our 'eternal sleep". Congratulations on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2018 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2018 9:15:00 AM

Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2018 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Line.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2018 8:36:00 AM

Well-crafted, Subimal. Shades of the third act of Thornton Wilder's play, "Our Town," where the narrator opines, in a scene set in a cemetary: "We're all waiting for that eternal something to come out in us." ... Excellent write, and congrats on your win! Best wishes, Gershon

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/2/2018 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon for visiting and for your inspirational comments.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/4/2018 2:11:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Constance La France

Date: 5/19/2018 10:55:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this well done write ~

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:04:00 AM

Thank you, Constance for placing the poem.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/19/2018 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful take on the eternal sleep of death. Enjoyed reading. Well written.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:03:00 AM

Thank so much, Susan for hour encouraging comments.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/18/2018 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Subimal!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:03:00 AM

Thank you, Edward

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2018 2:50:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:02:00 AM

Many thanks, Jan.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2018 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Subimal :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:02:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2018 12:40:00 PM

- A poem about death represent the emotional ... we have all death in wait - That's how it's always been, but still difficult - Congratulations on your 7th place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/20/2018 3:02:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise for your comments.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/16/2018 7:38:00 AM

Well done Subimal. I like the line: Brushed calm colors on the drab times of strife. Good luck in the contest :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/16/2018 11:59:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi for your visit and for your encouraging comments.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/16/2018 11:59:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi for your visit and for your encouraging comments.