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Waiting at the train station cafe

We are sitting at a table at the café by the station,
We are watching people passing,
We are guessing destinations.
We are waiting for our order,
Chatting mother with a daughter.
And we're talking of the old man
As he's waiting at the crossing.
We are wondering his journey
Of the route he may be taking -
A corduroy curiosity in his thin brown coat,
Plastic bags that carry string and other things of note.
Then all of a sudden, he is wandering our direction,
Charming and addressing us as “Ladies”,
Pretending he is thinking we are sisters,
Indulging him, we're happy to be listeners.

He has a sunny disposition, 
Though he is saying of his vision
That his eyes are getting cloudy -
He must go see an optician.
And he's telling us his stories of his Sunday-ing allotments,
Hearing of his winning, echoes of past glories.
Cultivating prizes for the growing and the showing of his champions -
Centurion onions, parsnips gladiator,
Okra, bhut bhindi, coriander.

Then purposefully he's pulling from his pocket, from his wallet 
A worn photo of a young man looking back at us.
His is sharing how they wanted for their boy they named Ishaan,
A boy, with his head in the clouds -
To be reaching for the stars and the sun.
Without pausing he is telling us scholarship was won.
Astrophysics he was studying.
Careering off to NASA, space systems engineering.

But Ishaan is soon returning
From the Californian dreaming -
Yearning to be grounded in the rhythms of the seasons.
Coming back to his roots.
Following the passing of his mother and reconnecting with his father
In the routines that are gardening.
Working quiet soils, where seeds are just beginning
As the world keeps on spinning.
To stand still awhile.

Then he is leaving, he is gone.
And in silence we are finishing our coffees and paying for our bill.
Feeling we have travelled,
Though, we were only sitting still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Radice Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 11:15 PM
Excellent Rachel. I read it through once before listening to you recite it as I was interested at what speed you would read some of the lines to compare as to how I had done. It was very similar. The first line actually reads like the motion of a train. Does that make sense? The slowing down of some lines and the speeding up in the reading invite comparisons to the movement of a train. I like how you ended the poem - a journey of a different sort. Cheers - Gary
Treacher Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 12:47 PM
Thank you so much for this feedback - I had hoped it carried the reader/listener along.
Gifford Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Hello Rachel, this is a great write and an enjoyable read. I find the people on train journeys entertaining. Have a great day my friend.
Treacher Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 1:40 PM
I agree! Train journeys are little capsuals of communities. Thank you for sharing in my poem.
Croft Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:45 PM
I listened. to you read it to me and it was very very beautiful. I am also a people watcher! There are so many things that you can pick up from people's actions.
Treacher Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:50 PM
Thank you, Karen. It's such a gift when others share their worlds with you.
Wolf Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 7:52 PM
Wow! What an awesome closing stanza. That's exactly how I felt too -- traveling while standing still. Great write, methinks. ~ Gershon
Treacher Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 11:03 PM
Thank you for visiting this poem, Gershon. Buses and trains are amazing people watching/meeting spaces.
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