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Waiting

All of my texts go unanswered My anxious calls slither to voicemail I glance at the huge grandfather clock My hands distractedly sorting the mail I then check my trusted wristwatch Its hands surely creeping beyond six Reprimanding my heartbeats to calm Some dinner I start to fix The traffic check on the radio Always has my undivided attention Crashes, injuries and lane closures— Your name to God I overtly mention Those metal and rubber monsters Frantically accelerating to get ahead Send a prickly chill down my spine As I mix the dough for bread The walls around seem to move closer The heat of the oven is stifling If only you could call me once Waiting and willing for the phone to ring Written on:-2/23/2017

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Date: 3/13/2017 1:39:00 PM
Waiting sometimes save us much troubles but could disturb the mind. Nice work Sara.
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Date: 3/5/2017 11:15:00 AM
Think my wife might relate to this when I forget to phone. Great poetry and congratulations! :-)
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Date: 2/23/2017 5:50:00 PM
I think they make pills for that, Mrs Sara. The poem had ME on edge. Matt. 6: 25-34
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Date: 2/23/2017 3:40:00 PM
Well done, Sara. : ) Very real concerns and fears. I hope I never get a certain call from my mother-in-law or my wife's sister.
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Date: 2/23/2017 12:58:00 PM
This feels a little lighthearted but I know deep inside this situation does not feel good at all. I have been there many times, worried and waiting for a call or them to pull in the driveway or something. Really nice Sara and thanks for your visit.
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