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Waiting

For more than forty years he mustered horses to the yard, Reminding all the younger blokes “You’ve ‘gotta’ stay on guard, For even decent broken horses have a spirit that is high, And the months of lengthy grazing, can make them saddle shy”. His spoken word was ‘gospel’ to the ringers on the rail, As they watched the flighty gelding with it’s sinewed body flail, In a wretched test of strength between a man and bucking horse, With just a moment lapsing came a death demanding force. The sickening thud of hoof against the now defenseless skull, Placed a numbness through the ringers in a seeming timeless lull, Some rushed toward their mentor, some to keep the horse at bay, And every face looked grim as they carried him away. Time can seem eternal when the basic aids are not of use, A man is hardly breathing and his limbs are falling loose, When the doctor is still coming from an hour’s flight away, And the women of the station ask the station men to pray. Throughout the day the horses wait beneath the bloodwood shade, And ringers eager in the morn have felt their interest fade, Their thoughts are feeling for the man upon a homestead bed, Not knowing if the man’s alive, or if the man is dead. Their faces gray and gaunt have their vision quite impaired, As they sought their own direction and in silence quietly stared, With prayers of understanding (that ringers rarely speak), The silence and the waiting turned around their other cheek. The hours passed to falling dusk and still there is no word, The whinnying of a waiting horse is all that can be heard, And the tension in the quarters caused a snap toward a bloke, When the eerie still was broken by… “Has anyone a smoke?” Through homestead blinds by shadows, steady movement could be seen, The ringers broke their silence wondering what the movements mean, They walked across the yard and heard the footsteps on the floor, And every mind was focused on the opening of the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/20/2015 4:41:00 PM
A wonderful tale and you certainly can tell a story Lindsay. Awesome. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/21/2015 6:12:00 PM
G'day Phyllis... thank you Phyllis. I think we all tell our thoughts and stories well. It's probably what helps keep us sane. Catch you soon Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 3/2/2015 8:33:00 AM
Lindsay, No one of whom I'm aware does a better job of telling stories in poetic form. Your poem is wonderful, and the last line is a touch of genius.
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:02:00 AM
G'day Paul... Thank you once again for your encouraging comment. I guess we are all wondering what the result was. Thanks agan mate - Lindsay
Date: 1/27/2015 11:28:00 AM
Nice one mate, I'm impressed to read yet another style of your poetry and it's in great form too. I shall read more later and get back to you. Best, Dennis
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:00:00 AM
G'day Dennis... thanks for dropping by. I look forward to catching up with you soon. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 1/25/2015 6:57:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem very much, Lindsay...love how it's written and the story!
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Date: 1/26/2015 8:20:00 PM
G'day David... Thanks mate for commenting and I'm pleased that you enjoyed one of my few outback bush ballads that I've written. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 1/24/2015 8:35:00 PM
Lindsay,so sad, it is hard to be patient when your waiting. 7 Hugs eve
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Date: 1/26/2015 8:06:00 PM
G'day Eve... Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, you are right; waiting under duress can be stressful. Regards - Lindsay

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