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She goes out for lunch To her favourite place She orders her meal She knows it will take time To receive here meal So with a writing pad A pen she has handy She will compose a poem This passes time waiting She begins to write Its a perfect way To wait for her meal She does this often To wait for the meal A chicken pot pie No time lost she writes She created a poem While she was waiting For her chicken pot pie She wrote a poem

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Date: 9/12/2024 6:52:00 AM
pleasant way to use your time... sage and workable, very Clever... salute dearest Darlene, alkas
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2024 10:30:00 AM
Hello Alakas, so nice to see you on my page. I do this when I am waiting for my appointments. It passes the waiting time. my dear friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Date: 9/11/2024 10:41:00 AM
Writing a poem is time well spent, nice one Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2024 11:03:00 AM
Hello John, I do this in waiting rooms. It passes the time. yes writing a poem is time well spent. John. Enjoy your daqy my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/8/2024 10:51:00 AM
Hey, inspiration is inspiration! Maybe next time, she'll order something a bit more exotic.
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Date: 9/8/2024 10:57:00 AM
Hello Jim Slaughter, Yes maybe she will order something a bit a bit more exotic. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/4/2024 4:59:00 AM
What a great suggestion, I’ll definitely give it a try. A wonderful piece, Darlene. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 9/4/2024 9:53:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, Yes it is. it works for me when i am waiting anywhere I go. Hugs /Darlene/
Date: 8/30/2024 1:49:00 PM
Great. Hmm. Objective? Yes. Perfect.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2024 10:05:00 AM
Hello Vilmos, Thank you for such a wonderful comment. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Date: 8/29/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear Darlene, First of all I love Chicken Pot Pie!! Especially homemade down on the farm. Your Poem was a pleasure to read for there are many places for us to write and create and dream. - Wonderful Reading your well inked poem this morning. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/29/2024 9:58:00 AM
Hello Daniel, Chicken pot pie is my fav. I have it often. We both enjoy chicken pot pie. Yes ,there are many places to have chicken pot pie. Thank you for reading my poem. blessings my dear friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/27/2024 10:46:00 AM
Hello Darlene, a beautiful poem. Nicely done. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2024 2:03:00 PM
Hello Mulu, thank you for the lovely comment., Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/26/2024 3:30:00 PM
That's the perfect way to make use of time while you wait, Darlene. I do the same like you, and time just flies by! This is an enjoyable poem, my friend; it was definitely worth waiting for the chicken pot pie :) Regards // paul
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:37:00 PM
Hello Paul, yes it was worth wakiting fot the chicken pot pie. i write4 in waiting rooms t. it passes time. Regards /Darlene/
Date: 8/26/2024 10:53:00 AM
Good one.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2024 11:36:00 AM
Hello Jay, Oh, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/26/2024 9:17:00 AM
Writing while you wait. Not my way really. I find it hard to write unless I have a flash of the muse and I must have a computer open in front of me. The worst is when some idea comes to me when I'm going to sleep. It will be gone by the morrow. Keep writing. Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/26/2024 11:43:00 AM
Hello Victor, sometimes when i am asleep, an idea comes to me in a dream. Then i wake up write down what i had seen in my dream, then do a poem from what I have written down. Most of my poetry comes from m y dreams. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 5:39:00 PM
This is such a lovely write Darlene thanks for sharing many blessings.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/25/2024 10:19:00 AM
Hello Yolanda, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your welcome. I hope allis well with you. Thank you. Many blessings to you my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 5:05:00 PM
It sounds like a lovely way to spend a lovely lunch afternoon dear Darlene, they say patience is golden, well worth the wait, hope the pot pie was delicious :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/25/2024 10:23:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Yes it was. It is my favourite meal there. I have it often. Yes patience is golden. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 3:12:00 PM
i now have a voice recorder on my phone but before that i would make notes on my phone! hugs jan xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/25/2024 10:25:00 AM
Hello Jan, i do not blame you for n ot wanting an I-phone. I do fine on my computer. Hugs /Darlene/
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:50:00 PM
i dont have an i phone just a samsung galaxy - i had it a few months back its an old model but does what I want. i dont want an i phone lol:-) hugs Han xx
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Jan, Oh that does sound like a great idea. I do not own an i-phone. It would cost too much to have both the computer and the I-phone. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 12:41:00 PM
What a fun "Waiting" write. Many poems/songs have been lost because they were Not written down. By the way, I love chicken pot pie. Have a wonderful day/weekend.......................
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:13:00 PM
Hello Paula, Yes many songs have been lost because they have not been written down. I also love chicken poot pie ity is my favourite. I will . Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 12:19:00 PM
It's always a good idea to carry a pen and notepad because if you don't write it down quickly it's gone forever. Enjoy your meal Darlene. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/24/2024 3:11:00 PM
Hello Tom, Yes it is gone forever when an idea comes and no paper or pen in hand. slometimes i wake up with an idea and write it down then create a poem from the idea. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 8/24/2024 12:08:00 PM
Hi, Darlene. Writing poetry while waiting your order is worthwhile hobby. It's "two birds in one stone". I like this poem, simple yet with substance. Thank you for sharing your thoughts to the world. Love lots.../Hugo.
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:09:00 PM
Hello Hugo, I have written poetry while waiting for the dentist to se me. In waiting rooms when going for a test of some sort. It passes the time. Yes waiting for my order I would write a poem. Your welcome. Love lots /Darlene/

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