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You will see them In the malls Once proud Vibrant Semi-predatory Creatures Idling Semi-lurking Outside Ladies dressing rooms Lingering Near Ladies bath rooms Scanning Unfamiliar horizons Seeking out their prey Short grey haired Quick In a slyly agile way Evaders Of a known hunter Foragers Averting the gaze Of those Once proud Vibrant Semi-predatory Creatures Left holding Their bags.

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Date: 11/15/2023 6:43:00 PM
I guess I'm not a 'lady's man.' (Can one say that these days, i.e., without explaining his/her/its/their pronouns?).
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Date: 11/15/2023 2:19:00 PM
your poem cracked me up...so true...and you wrote it beautifully! Your words made me smile...thanks! enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 11/15/2023 5:51:00 AM
LOL John..I would say more awkward that they will be viewed that way. This was very funny though.
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