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Wait, He Said What

When she found out she would be working late She asked if he could pick her up at eight Attempted romance Drew looks askance When he said, "It'll be hard to bear the wait!"

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/12/2019 10:38:00 PM

A weighty one, for sure, Pat. LOL. Thanks, Gershon

Pat Adams
Date: 12/13/2019 3:16:00 PM

Yeah, sometimes even when you say it right it comes out wrong!.............80)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/30/2019 6:35:00 PM

G'day PAT ... I got it. A nice play on words PAT - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay!........pat

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/30/2019 5:14:00 PM

Good one Pat ;D, xomo

Pat Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Maureen!.....80)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/30/2019 5:04:00 PM

ha! clever play on words, pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Ilene!..........80)

Na Na

Date: 11/30/2019 4:50:00 PM

Hi Pat nicely written. This has happened to me on a few occasions. Thanks for sharing this

Pat Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 7:09:00 AM

Glad you like it Gregory!......pat