Wait, He Said What

When she found out she would be working late
She asked if he could pick her up at eight
Attempted romance
Drew looks askance
When he said, "It'll be hard to bear the wait!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 10:38 PM
A weighty one, for sure, Pat. LOL. Thanks, Gershon
Adams Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Yeah, sometimes even when you say it right it comes out wrong!.............80)
Laurie Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 6:35 PM
G'day PAT ... I got it. A nice play on words PAT - Lindsay
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December 1, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Lindsay!........pat
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November 30, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Good one Pat ;D, xomo
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December 1, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Maureen!.....80)
Bauer Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 5:04 PM
ha! clever play on words, pat!
Adams Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Ilene!..........80)
Na Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Hi Pat nicely written. This has happened to me on a few occasions. Thanks for sharing this
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December 1, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Glad you like it Gregory!......pat
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