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two lives run in parallel lines never crossing never intersecting our lines run miles apart never knowing never touching two lives two lines always separate always parallel parallel lines meet at the horizon I'll be waiting there

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Date: 3/7/2017 7:47:00 PM
I like! I should say read my poem... but instead I will say check out "I saw a man" by Stephen Crane, which inspired my own horizon poem. 7 for this lovely write :) xomo
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Forrest Pasky
Date: 3/8/2017 12:14:00 AM
Hi Maureen, I've now looked at a fair amount of your work. You can see my comments. Which piece is "horizon" poem? Just to make sure I get it right? Thanks. Forrest

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