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Wait

WAIT

time lag

p a t i e n t l y

shy ugly  duckling

cold and sad he wants death

seasons change reveals mused swan 

"timed doorway to breakthroughs: patience"


(c) Olive Eloisa
11:56 am
June 03, 2014

Contest Name	CREATE YOUR PYRAMID!
Sponsor	Nette Onclaud
Theme: hourglass

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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James Fraser Date: 3/19/2015 4:02:00 PM Reminds on the song 'There once was an ugly duckling' who grew to become a Swan. Nice take if it's on the said song Olive, hugs//Jamesxxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/24/2015 7:12:00 AM Thanks much James.. :)! weeee hugs and hugs!

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/16/2014 3:31:00 PM enjoyed the transformational tone of your work, eloi.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/24/2014 4:49:00 PM Thank you so much Nette. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/15/2014 6:58:00 PM you are welcome Olive... Linda Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2014 10:59:00 AM This is also a great and brilliant write my dear friend Olive. My hearty congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers! Belated thanks for your precious time stopping by on my poems and your lovely comments. So much appreciated. I'm so sorry for coming only now. Pls. forgive me. I'll be back soon ok. Thanks. love lots and hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/24/2014 4:48:00 PM Thank appreciate your lovely warm comments.. :D

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/12/2014 12:00:00 PM This is a gem - no wonder it is such a winner! Congratulations on another great win! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 3:30:00 PM Thank you Pandita.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :) GBU

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/12/2014 12:12:00 AM So awesome to see you with a centered winning poem. Big congratulations, Olive. Now try putting the italics tag along with the center one!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 1:33:00 AM HAhaha yes Andrea :) I know now...:) thank you so much... Hugs

Skat A Date: 6/11/2014 11:17:00 PM Olive, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 1:33:00 AM Thank you Skat..:) I appreciate it..:)

Carrie Richards Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM Yes........something unique, and original !! I love it when someone thinks out of the box !! Congratulations!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM Thank You Carrie.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :D

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/11/2014 3:21:00 PM Nice Olive I enjoyed the different take on the subject! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:43:00 PM :) thank DEbbie.. :) your comments are very kind. :)

Faye Gibson Date: 6/11/2014 2:34:00 PM Beautiful, Olive. I do enjoy your writing. Congratulations! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM Thanks Faye.. :) I enjoy yours too.. :D

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2014 9:48:00 AM Sweet Olive, Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:29:00 PM Thank you Pretty sweet LInda.. :D hugs and hugs..

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/11/2014 6:36:00 AM Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:28:00 PM Thank you Dr. Ram ;) GBU

Mohan Chutani Date: 6/11/2014 3:32:00 AM Olive, my friend. hearty congratulations on your Patience 'n Wait win. enjoyed your pyramid. Mohan Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:27:00 PM Thank you MOhan my friend too.. :) weeee thanks for considering me as your friend.. :D

Tim Smith Date: 6/10/2014 11:27:00 PM Lovely Olive...congrats on the win Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/11/2014 3:24:00 PM Thank you Tim... :D

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/7/2014 3:07:00 PM yeow, SOUP MAIL!.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2014 3:53:00 PM Thanks Nette..:)

Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2014 1:33:00 PM This must have taken patience to create - i finally know how to centre my work too :-) Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2014 2:57:00 AM Olive YOU inspired me to have a go at this contest and we share a 4th place - thank you so much! Hugs Jan xxxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2014 3:52:00 PM Thank you Jan..:) I appreciate you drop by..:) GBU always :) hugs Andrea help me..:)

Paul Callus Date: 6/5/2014 1:13:00 PM Those who wait with patience finally get rewarded! You did create a pyramid! gl in contest. // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 1:31:00 AM Hahaha not much Paul...:) thank you..:) muffins?! Paul Callus Date: 6/11/2014 4:32:00 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!:)) I see that Pinoys are clever pyramid builders:)) Paul Callus Date: 6/8/2014 3:32:00 PM SOUP MAIL......!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/8/2014 1:02:00 PM Thank you Paul..:) this another try..:)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/3/2014 4:18:00 PM hahahah. YOU DID IT. You must have seen my message right away and followed through. Awesome. I am in a hurry to get home. Yep, it is right under our noses. that is what makes it so funny. Now go to Joseph May's and try to figure out what he did wrong with his first line!!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 4:42:00 PM hahhaa yes I will check and see it too.. :D thanks much. :D i have some giggles here lools.. :D GOd bless you always.. :D hugs and hugs and well claps.. :D Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/3/2014 4:20:00 PM oh thanks much Andrea.. :D but i got it already.. :D i tried and tried and tried it and so i get it.. :D i think i have 4-5 tries.. :D lools Thanks much.. :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/3/2014 4:09:00 PM Olive you need to do something different to center this. I am unable to tell you what to do because when I use the symbols, it takes my message to you to Error page. email me at Wordwarrior55@hotmail.com and I will try to explain. Better yet, I am going to blog about it later when I get some time. Login to Reply

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 6/3/2014 11:11:00 AM Lovely little gem Olive! Always~~Keith:-) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/8/2014 12:59:00 PM Thank you Keith.. Your comment is my gem too..

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/3/2014 5:11:00 AM Nice take on the theme of the hourglass, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/8/2014 12:56:00 PM ThAnk you Dr. Ram :) really appreciate it