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WAIT time lag p a t i e n t l y shy ugly duckling cold and sad he wants death seasons change reveals mused swan "timed doorway to breakthroughs: patience" (c) Olive Eloisa 11:56 am June 03, 2014 Contest Name CREATE YOUR PYRAMID! Sponsor Nette Onclaud Theme: hourglass

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James Fraser

Date: 3/19/2015 4:02:00 PM

Reminds on the song 'There once was an ugly duckling' who grew to become a Swan. Nice take if it's on the said song Olive, hugs//Jamesxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/24/2015 7:12:00 AM

Thanks much James.. :)! weeee hugs and hugs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2014 3:31:00 PM

enjoyed the transformational tone of your work, eloi.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 4:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2014 6:58:00 PM

you are welcome Olive... Linda

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2014 10:59:00 AM

This is also a great and brilliant write my dear friend Olive. My hearty congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers! Belated thanks for your precious time stopping by on my poems and your lovely comments. So much appreciated. I'm so sorry for coming only now. Pls. forgive me. I'll be back soon ok. Thanks. love lots and hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 4:48:00 PM

Thank appreciate your lovely warm comments.. :D

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/12/2014 12:00:00 PM

This is a gem - no wonder it is such a winner! Congratulations on another great win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Pandita.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :) GBU

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2014 12:12:00 AM

So awesome to see you with a centered winning poem. Big congratulations, Olive. Now try putting the italics tag along with the center one!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 1:33:00 AM

HAhaha yes Andrea :) I know now...:) thank you so much... Hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 11:17:00 PM

Olive, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 1:33:00 AM

Thank you Skat..:) I appreciate it..:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM

Yes........something unique, and original !! I love it when someone thinks out of the box !! Congratulations!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thank You Carrie.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :D

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2014 3:21:00 PM

Nice Olive I enjoyed the different take on the subject! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:43:00 PM

:) thank DEbbie.. :) your comments are very kind. :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful, Olive. I do enjoy your writing. Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Faye.. :) I enjoy yours too.. :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 9:48:00 AM

Sweet Olive, Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Pretty sweet LInda.. :D hugs and hugs..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/11/2014 6:36:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram ;) GBU

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/11/2014 3:32:00 AM

Olive, my friend. hearty congratulations on your Patience 'n Wait win. enjoyed your pyramid. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:27:00 PM

Thank you MOhan my friend too.. :) weeee thanks for considering me as your friend.. :D

Tim Smith

Date: 6/10/2014 11:27:00 PM

Lovely Olive...congrats on the win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Tim... :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/7/2014 3:07:00 PM

yeow, SOUP MAIL!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Nette..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2014 1:33:00 PM

This must have taken patience to create - i finally know how to centre my work too :-) Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2014 2:57:00 AM

Olive YOU inspired me to have a go at this contest and we share a 4th place - thank you so much! Hugs Jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 3:52:00 PM

Thank you Jan..:) I appreciate you drop by..:) GBU always :) hugs Andrea help me..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2014 1:13:00 PM

Those who wait with patience finally get rewarded! You did create a pyramid! gl in contest. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/12/2014 1:31:00 AM

Hahaha not much Paul...:) thank you..:) muffins?!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/11/2014 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!:)) I see that Pinoys are clever pyramid builders:))

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2014 3:32:00 PM

SOUP MAIL......!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Paul..:) this another try..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2014 4:18:00 PM

hahahah. YOU DID IT. You must have seen my message right away and followed through. Awesome. I am in a hurry to get home. Yep, it is right under our noses. that is what makes it so funny. Now go to Joseph May's and try to figure out what he did wrong with his first line!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 4:42:00 PM

hahhaa yes I will check and see it too.. :D thanks much. :D i have some giggles here lools.. :D GOd bless you always.. :D hugs and hugs and well claps.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 4:20:00 PM

oh thanks much Andrea.. :D but i got it already.. :D i tried and tried and tried it and so i get it.. :D i think i have 4-5 tries.. :D lools Thanks much.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2014 4:09:00 PM

Olive you need to do something different to center this. I am unable to tell you what to do because when I use the symbols, it takes my message to you to Error page. email me at Wordwarrior55@hotmail.com and I will try to explain. Better yet, I am going to blog about it later when I get some time.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/3/2014 11:11:00 AM

Lovely little gem Olive! Always~~Keith:-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Keith.. Your comment is my gem too..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2014 5:11:00 AM

Nice take on the theme of the hourglass, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 12:56:00 PM

ThAnk you Dr. Ram :) really appreciate it