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WAIT

time lag

p a t i e n t l y

shy ugly  duckling

cold and sad he wants death

seasons change reveals mused swan 

"timed doorway to breakthroughs: patience"


(c) Olive Eloisa
11:56 am
June 03, 2014

Contest Name	CREATE YOUR PYRAMID!
Sponsor	Nette Onclaud
Theme: hourglass

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James Fraser

March 19, 2015 at 4:02 PM

Reminds on the song 'There once was an ugly duckling' who grew to become a Swan. Nice take if it's on the said song Olive, hugs//Jamesxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 24, 2015 at 7:12 AM

Thanks much James.. :)! weeee hugs and hugs!

Nette Onclaud

June 16, 2014 at 3:31 PM

enjoyed the transformational tone of your work, eloi.. belated congrats on your fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 24, 2014 at 4:49 PM

Thank you so much Nette. :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 15, 2014 at 6:58 PM

you are welcome Olive... Linda

Len Gasun

June 13, 2014 at 10:59 AM

This is also a great and brilliant write my dear friend Olive. My hearty congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers! Belated thanks for your precious time stopping by on my poems and your lovely comments. So much appreciated. I'm so sorry for coming only now. Pls. forgive me. I'll be back soon ok. Thanks. love lots and hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM

Thank appreciate your lovely warm comments.. :D

Pandita Sietesantos

June 12, 2014 at 12:00 PM

This is a gem - no wonder it is such a winner! Congratulations on another great win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 12, 2014 at 3:30 PM

Thank you Pandita.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :) GBU

Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2014 at 12:12 AM

So awesome to see you with a centered winning poem. Big congratulations, Olive. Now try putting the italics tag along with the center one!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 12, 2014 at 1:33 AM

HAhaha yes Andrea :) I know now...:) thank you so much... Hugs

Skat A

June 11, 2014 at 11:17 PM

Olive, :) CONGRATS in Nette's CREATE YOUR PYRAMID contest! Luv ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 12, 2014 at 1:33 AM

Thank you Skat..:) I appreciate it..:)

Carrie Richards

June 11, 2014 at 3:30 PM

Yes........something unique, and original !! I love it when someone thinks out of the box !! Congratulations!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:30 PM

Thank You Carrie.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :D

Debbie Guzzi

June 11, 2014 at 3:21 PM

Nice Olive I enjoyed the different take on the subject! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:43 PM

:) thank DEbbie.. :) your comments are very kind. :)

Faye Gibson

June 11, 2014 at 2:34 PM

Beautiful, Olive. I do enjoy your writing. Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:30 PM

Thanks Faye.. :) I enjoy yours too.. :D

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2014 at 9:48 AM

Sweet Olive, Congratulations, with your sweet PYRAMID win.... Hugs ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:29 PM

Thank you Pretty sweet LInda.. :D hugs and hugs..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 11, 2014 at 6:36 AM

Congrats on a fine win, creating a lovely Pyramid, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:28 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram ;) GBU

Mohan Chutani

June 11, 2014 at 3:32 AM

Olive, my friend. hearty congratulations on your Patience 'n Wait win. enjoyed your pyramid. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:27 PM

Thank you MOhan my friend too.. :) weeee thanks for considering me as your friend.. :D

Tim Smith

June 10, 2014 at 11:27 PM

Lovely Olive...congrats on the win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 11, 2014 at 3:24 PM

Thank you Tim... :D

Nette Onclaud

June 7, 2014 at 3:07 PM

yeow, SOUP MAIL!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2014 at 3:53 PM

Thanks Nette..:)

Jan Allison

June 6, 2014 at 1:33 PM

This must have taken patience to create - i finally know how to centre my work too :-) Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison

June 11, 2014 at 2:57 AM

Olive YOU inspired me to have a go at this contest and we share a 4th place - thank you so much! Hugs Jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Thank you Jan..:) I appreciate you drop by..:) GBU always :) hugs Andrea help me..:)

Paul Callus

June 5, 2014 at 1:13 PM

Those who wait with patience finally get rewarded! You did create a pyramid! gl in contest. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 12, 2014 at 1:31 AM

Hahaha not much Paul...:) thank you..:) muffins?!

Paul Callus

June 11, 2014 at 4:32 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!:)) I see that Pinoys are clever pyramid builders:))

Paul Callus

June 8, 2014 at 3:32 PM

SOUP MAIL......!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 8, 2014 at 1:02 PM

Thank you Paul..:) this another try..:)

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2014 at 4:18 PM

hahahah. YOU DID IT. You must have seen my message right away and followed through. Awesome. I am in a hurry to get home. Yep, it is right under our noses. that is what makes it so funny. Now go to Joseph May's and try to figure out what he did wrong with his first line!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 3, 2014 at 4:42 PM

hahhaa yes I will check and see it too.. :D thanks much. :D i have some giggles here lools.. :D GOd bless you always.. :D hugs and hugs and well claps.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 3, 2014 at 4:20 PM

oh thanks much Andrea.. :D but i got it already.. :D i tried and tried and tried it and so i get it.. :D i think i have 4-5 tries.. :D lools Thanks much.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2014 at 4:09 PM

Olive you need to do something different to center this. I am unable to tell you what to do because when I use the symbols, it takes my message to you to Error page. email me at [email protected] and I will try to explain. Better yet, I am going to blog about it later when I get some time.